Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping. It helps me to stay organized and ensure that I don't forget any important item. For example when I shop for grocery, having at least sell me time to prevent me from buying accessory thing.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make a lift for my work because it helps me to stay organized and focus. For example, by listing text in order of priority, I can manage my time more efficiently and avoid forgetting important duty. Overall making this evening.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Some people dislike making English because they find it restrictive and prefer a more spontaneous approach to organizing their tests. Additionally, some may feel that this had unnecessary pressure or stress, especially if they struggle to completely.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer making a list on my phone because it's more convenient and accessible. For example, I can easily add a more deleted item anytime, but don't worry about losing the paper. Also, using help me help me organize my tests better than set reminder.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases, such as "having at least sell me time" and "accessory thing." To improve, focus on using correct grammar and clearer vocabulary. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget any important items. For example, when I shop for groceries, having a list saves me time and prevents me from buying unnecessary things.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: There are several errors in word choice and sentence structure, such as "make a lift," "listing text," and "Overall making this evening." To improve, use accurate vocabulary and complete sentences. Also, add linking words to make your answer coherent.
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused. For example, by listing tasks in order of priority, I can manage my time more efficiently and avoid forgetting important duties. Overall, making lists has improved my productivity.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Your answer contains unclear and incorrect phrases like "making English," "organizing their tests," and incomplete sentences. To improve, ensure your sentences are complete and use relevant vocabulary. Also, provide specific reasons with linking words to explain your ideas clearly.
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer a more spontaneous way of organizing their tasks. Additionally, some may feel that lists create unnecessary pressure or stress, especially if they find it hard to complete everything on the list.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Your answer has some unclear phrases like "add a more deleted item" and "using help me help me organize my tests better than set reminder." To improve, use clear and correct vocabulary and sentence structures. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and accessible. For example, I can easily add or delete items anytime without worrying about losing paper. Also, using my phone helps me organize my tasks better than setting reminders.
× It helps me to stay organized and ensure that I don't forget any important item.
✓ It helps me to stay organized and ensure that I don't forget any important items.
The word 'item' should be plural 'items' because it refers to multiple things on a shopping list, not just one.
× For example when I shop for grocery, having at least sell me time to prevent me from buying accessory thing.
✓ For example, when I shop for groceries, having a list saves me time and prevents me from buying unnecessary things.
The original sentence is unclear and contains multiple errors. 'Grocery' should be plural 'groceries'. 'Having at least sell me time' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'having a list saves me time'. 'Accessory thing' is incorrect; it should be 'unnecessary things'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.
× Yes, I usually make a lift for my work because it helps me to stay organized and focus.
✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me to stay organized and focus.
The word 'lift' is a typo and should be 'list'. This correction is necessary for the sentence to make sense.
× For example, by listing text in order of priority, I can manage my time more efficiently and avoid forgetting important duty.
✓ For example, by listing tasks in order of priority, I can manage my time more efficiently and avoid forgetting important duties.
'Text' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'tasks'. Also, 'important duty' should be plural 'important duties' to match the context of multiple responsibilities.
× Overall making this evening.
✓ Overall, making lists is helpful.
The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It lacks a subject and verb. The correction provides a complete and meaningful sentence relevant to the context.
× Some people dislike making English because they find it restrictive and prefer a more spontaneous approach to organizing their tests.
✓ Some people dislike making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer a more spontaneous approach to organizing their tasks.
'Making English' is incorrect and likely a typo; it should be 'making lists'. Also, 'tests' should be 'tasks' to fit the context of organizing work or activities.
× Additionally, some may feel that this had unnecessary pressure or stress, especially if they struggle to completely.
✓ Additionally, some may feel that this adds unnecessary pressure or stress, especially if they struggle to complete tasks.
'Had' is incorrect tense and should be 'adds'. The phrase 'struggle to completely' is incomplete; it should be 'struggle to complete tasks' for clarity.
× I prefer making a list on my phone because it's more convenient and accessible.
✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and accessible.
'A list' can be pluralized to 'lists' to better reflect the general habit of making multiple lists over time.
× For example, I can easily add a more deleted item anytime, but don't worry about losing the paper.
✓ For example, I can easily add or delete items anytime, and I don't have to worry about losing paper lists.
'Add a more deleted item' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'add or delete items'. Also, 'losing the paper' is better expressed as 'losing paper lists'.
× Also, using help me help me organize my tests better than set reminder.
✓ Also, using my phone helps me organize my tasks better than setting reminders.
The original sentence is repetitive and unclear. 'Using help me help me' is incorrect. The correction clarifies the subject and verb and corrects 'tests' to 'tasks' and 'set reminder' to 'setting reminders'.