Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
No, because the grocery store is really close to my house and also I go there very often so when I want to buy some supplies I just go there whenever I want.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
I'm not working right now, but in the future I think I'll make a list for my work every day because I think it's really important to know what should I do today and I think it's really convenient for me.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
On my personal perspective, some people don't like to make a list me because they haven't used this method, so they don't realize how essential is the list.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
For me I prefer to make a list on my phone because now its really convenient to record everything on your phone and also the phone can remind you before you done.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然,但句子较长且有些重复,建议简化句子结构,避免冗余,同时增加连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because the grocery store is very close to my house. Also, I go there frequently, so I just buy what I need whenever I want.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容清晰,但句子结构稍显重复,建议使用连接词并调整语序,使表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: I'm not working at the moment, but in the future, I plan to make a daily work list because it helps me know what tasks I need to complete and is very convenient.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清,建议注意语法结构,避免重复,并使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: From my perspective, some people don't like making lists because they haven't tried this method and don't realize how useful it can be.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚,但有语法错误和用词不当,建议注意时态和词汇选择,使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's very convenient to record everything, and the phone can remind me before I finish a task.
× On my personal perspective, some people don't like to make a list me because they haven't used this method, so they don't realize how essential is the list.
✓ From my personal perspective, some people don't like to make a list because they haven't used this method, so they don't realize how essential the list is.
句中“make a list me”中的“me”使用错误,应去掉;此外,表达“从我的个人角度”应使用“From my personal perspective”;最后,句子中“how essential is the list”语序错误,正确语序应为“how essential the list is”。这些错误属于代词使用错误和句子结构错误。
× On my personal perspective, some people don't like to make a list me because they haven't used this method, so they don't realize how essential is the list.
✓ From my personal perspective, some people don't like to make a list because they haven't used this method, so they don't realize how essential the list is.
句中“how essential is the list”中,定冠词“the”使用正确,但语序错误,应调整为“how essential the list is”。
× For me I prefer to make a list on my phone because now its really convenient to record everything on your phone and also the phone can remind you before you done.
✓ For me, I prefer to make a list on my phone because now it's really convenient to record everything on your phone and also the phone can remind you before you are done.
句中“its”应为“it's”(it is的缩写),属于代词错误;“before you done”缺少助动词,应为“before you are done”。
× For me I prefer to make a list on my phone because now its really convenient to record everything on your phone and also the phone can remind you before you done.
✓ For me, I prefer to make a list on my phone because now it's really convenient to record everything on your phone and also the phone can remind you before you are done.
句中“your phone”与前文主语“I”不一致,建议统一使用“my phone”以保持一致性。