Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course I make a list when I shop because in the supermarket I know that it's very huge and big. So if I don't make a list, I can't find the things I want. So make a list can save my time to shopping.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course, I make a list for my work and it's very, very good because I check my list to do what will I do next, and it's improve my efficiency in learning my study. So it's very useful.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I think maybe they are the pea person. It come from the test of MBTI. The Pi person don't like make lists and they just want to leave their schedules for free and.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on my phone because with the economy products, it's very convenient for us and I can't leave my phone in my daily lives. So if I write down in the papers, maybe I think I will lose it by accident. But the phone?
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答时应避免重复表达,如“huge and big”意思重复。句子结构需更自然流畅,且注意语法,如“make a list can save my time to shopping”应改为“making a list can save me time when shopping”。建议使用连接词使回答更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because supermarkets are usually very large. Making a list helps me find what I need quickly and saves time.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,如“it's improve my efficiency”应为“it improves my efficiency”。表达应更自然,避免重复“very, very good”。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks. By checking the list, I know what to do next, which improves my efficiency.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不够清晰,表达不完整且有语法错误,如“pea person”应为“P-type person”,且句子未完成。建议用更准确的词汇和完整句子表达观点。
Ví dụ: Some people may dislike making lists because they prefer to keep their schedules flexible. For example, according to the MBTI personality test, people with a Perceiving type tend to avoid strict plans.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够清晰,语法和用词有误,如“with the economy products”不明确,句子未完成。建议用更准确的词汇和完整句子表达观点,并使用连接词。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I always have my phone with me. Writing on paper might cause me to lose the list accidentally.
× So make a list can save my time to shopping.
✓ So making a list can save me time when shopping.
这里'so make a list'中的'make'应该用动名词形式'making',因为它作为主语使用。'save my time to shopping'中,'save me time when shopping'更自然,'to shopping'用法错误。
× I check my list to do what will I do next, and it's improve my efficiency in learning my study.
✓ I check my list to see what I will do next, and it improves my efficiency in studying.
'to do what will I do next'语序错误,应该是'to see what I will do next'。'it's improve'应为第三人称单数动词形式'improves'。'in learning my study'表达不自然,改为'in studying'更合适。
× I think maybe they are the pea person.
✓ I think maybe they are the Pi person.
这里'pea person'应为'MBTI'中的'Pi person',是专有名词,拼写错误。
× It come from the test of MBTI.
✓ It comes from the test of MBTI.
主语是第三人称单数,动词应加-s,'come'应为'comes'。
× The Pi person don't like make lists and they just want to leave their schedules for free and.
✓ The Pi person doesn't like to make lists and they just want to keep their schedules free.
'don't'应为'doesn't',因为主语是第三人称单数。'like make lists'应为'like to make lists'。'leave their schedules for free'表达不准确,改为'keep their schedules free'更合适。
× I prefer to make a list on my phone because with the economy products, it's very convenient for us and I can't leave my phone in my daily lives.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because with economic products, it's very convenient for us and I can't leave my phone in my daily life.
'economy products'应为'economic products'。'in my daily lives'应为'in my daily life',life是不可数名词。
× So if I write down in the papers, maybe I think I will lose it by accident.
✓ So if I write it down on paper, maybe I will lose it by accident.
'write down in the papers'应为'write it down on paper','on paper'是固定搭配。'maybe I think'重复,简化为'maybe I will'更自然。