Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Last week I took an MBTA test and found out that I am a judging person. Because of this, I always like to make a shopping list before I go to the store. It helps me still organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do. As I just said before, I am a judging person, which means I always like to make a kind of list including the work related list. This habit helps me keep track of my tasks more efficiently, which saves me time and avoids unnecessary purchases.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I think this depends on the personality. Maybe the person just have a personality of freedom, they often do whatever they think of without planning. Or maybe they just have a good memory that can remember everything they need to do clearly.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
This question I would like to see when I was a 5 year old little girl, I prefer to write my list on paper in order to practice my writing. But as a as a high school student I would like to make a list on my phone.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中提到了个人性格和购物清单的关系,但表达不够自然,有语法错误(如"helps me still organized"应为"helps me stay organized"),且开头提及MBTA测试与问题关联不大,建议回答时直接切入主题,避免无关信息。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before going to the store because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答结构较好,表达了观点和理由,但部分句子不够简洁,如"a kind of list including the work related list"重复且不自然。建议使用更简洁的表达,并注意逻辑连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me organize my tasks efficiently, saving time and preventing mistakes.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较为简单,语法错误较多(如"person just have"应为"person just has"),且表达不够自然。建议丰富内容,使用更准确的语法和连接词,使回答更流畅。
Ví dụ: Some people may dislike making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and flexible, or they might have a good memory that helps them remember tasks without writing them down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中时间表达混乱且语法错误较多(如"I would like to see when I was a 5 year old"不通顺),建议简化句子结构,明确表达现在和过去的偏好,避免重复和错误。
Ví dụ: When I was a child, I preferred writing lists on paper to practice my handwriting. Now, as a high school student, I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient.
× Maybe the person just have a personality of freedom, they often do whatever they think of without planning.
✓ Maybe the person just has a personality of freedom, they often do whatever they think of without planning.
这里主语是单数的“person”,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“has”,而不是“have”。这是单复数一致性错误。
× This question I would like to see when I was a 5 year old little girl, I prefer to write my list on paper in order to practice my writing.
✓ When I was a 5 year old little girl, I preferred to write my list on paper in order to practice my writing.
句子中“would like to see”用法不当,且时态不匹配。描述过去习惯应使用过去时“preferred”,而不是现在时“prefer”。此外,句子结构混乱,应调整顺序使表达更清晰。