List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and repetitive. Try to give a direct response first, then explain your reason clearly and concisely. Avoid repeating phrases like 'to be frank' and use correct grammar and vocabulary to express your ideas naturally.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time by preventing unnecessary purchases.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me remember all the important tasks. This way, I avoid forgetting vital items and can work more efficiently.

Gợi ý: Your answer is vague and contains informal language and grammar mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly with proper vocabulary and sentence structure, and provide reasons to support your idea.

Ví dụ: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to live in the moment and make decisions spontaneously rather than planning ahead.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but incomplete and contains grammatical errors. Make sure to finish your sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, use correct grammar and vocabulary for clarity.

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone for a couple of reasons. First of all, I always have my phone with me, so I won't forget the list. Secondly, it's easier to edit and organise items digitally.

× To be frank, I don't make a list because to be frank, I do because you can't remember what you wanna shop and you know it private to wasting time.

✓ To be frank, I don't make a list because I don't think you can remember what you want to shop for, and you know it leads to wasting time.

The original sentence uses 'because' twice incorrectly, causing confusion. Also, 'wanna' is informal and 'private to wasting time' is incorrect. The sentence needs clearer conjunction use and proper phrasing to express the idea clearly.

× To be frank, I don't make a list because to be frank, I do because you can't remember what you wanna shop and you know it private to wasting time.

✓ To be frank, I don't make a list because I don't think you can remember what you want to shop for, and you know it leads to wasting time.

The pronoun 'you' is used ambiguously, mixing first person and second person perspectives. It should be consistent and clear to avoid confusion.

× Yes, I do make it because it can help me to remember everything which I need and avoid to forgetting vital items and you can't efficiently work in.

✓ Yes, I do make it because it can help me remember everything I need and avoid forgetting vital items, so you can work efficiently.

The phrase 'avoid to forgetting' is incorrect; 'avoid' should be followed by the gerund form 'forgetting'. Also, 'work in' is incorrect; it should be 'work efficiently' or similar. Prepositions and verb forms need correction.

× Yes, I do make it because it can help me to remember everything which I need and avoid to forgetting vital items and you can't efficiently work in.

✓ Yes, I do make it because it can help me remember everything I need and avoid forgetting vital items, so you can work efficiently.

The pronoun 'you' is used inconsistently in a personal statement. It should be consistent with the subject 'I' or rephrased to general statements.

× I'm not quite sure, but in my idea some people wanna live at the moment and choose everything at moment.

✓ I'm not quite sure, but in my opinion, some people want to live in the moment and choose everything at the moment.

The phrase 'in my idea' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'in my opinion'. Also, 'wanna' is informal and 'at moment' needs the definite article 'the'. The conjunction and phrase usage need correction.

× I'm not quite sure, but in my idea some people wanna live at the moment and choose everything at moment.

✓ I'm not quite sure, but in my opinion, some people want to live in the moment and choose everything at the moment.

The preposition 'at' should be 'in' when referring to 'living in the moment'. Also, 'at moment' requires the definite article 'the' to be grammatically correct.

× I prefer make a list on my phone for a couple of reasons.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone for a couple of reasons.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to make' rather than the bare verb 'make'.

× First of all, if you never gonna forget your mobile phone and you can have it in everywhere which you go.

✓ First of all, you will never forget your mobile phone, and you can have it everywhere you go.

'Never gonna' is informal and incorrect here; 'will never' is appropriate. Also, 'in everywhere' is incorrect; 'everywhere' does not need a preposition.

× First of all, if you never gonna forget your mobile phone and you can have it in everywhere which you go.

✓ First of all, you will never forget your mobile phone, and you can have it everywhere you go.

The preposition 'in' before 'everywhere' is unnecessary and incorrect. 'Everywhere' functions as an adverb and does not require a preposition.

× Secondly, I think it is easier to.

✓ Secondly, I think it is easier to use.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object or verb after 'to'. It needs completion to be grammatically correct and meaningful.