Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course. I'd always make a list when I go shopping because I think it's a good way to know what I want to buy and what I like.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes of course, my MBTI is INFG and I always do in to some schedule before I work or study.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Hmm actually I didn't thought about this question before but I think they are lazy. For example my brother is lazy so he don't like making plans.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer Middle East on the paper because when I was a junior high school student, I prepared for the college entrance exam. I plan on the paper and I think it's a good way to push me out. Push me.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较为简单且有些重复,"what I want to buy"和"what I like"意思接近,建议避免重复表达,增加具体细节使回答更丰富。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember the items I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary things. For example, last week I listed all the ingredients for a recipe I wanted to try.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰,MBTI类型拼写错误且与问题关联不强,建议直接回答是否做工作清单,并说明效果,语言表达需更准确。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a to-do list before starting work, which helps me stay organized and complete tasks efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不够礼貌且语法错误较多,建议避免使用负面词汇如“lazy”,并用更礼貌和具体的理由解释。
Ví dụ: Some people might find making lists time-consuming or prefer to keep things flexible, so they avoid planning in detail.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答中出现了无关词汇“Middle East”,表达不清晰且语法错误,建议明确表达偏好并给出具体原因,语言要连贯。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because writing things down helps me remember better and stay focused, especially during important exams.
× I'd always make a list when I go shopping because I think it's a good way to know what I want to buy and what I like.
✓ I always make a list when I go shopping because I think it's a good way to know what I want to buy and what I like.
这里使用了“I'd always make”,其中“'d”是“would”的缩写,表示过去或假设语气,但句子描述的是习惯性动作,应该使用一般现在时“always make”。
× Yes of course, my MBTI is INFG and I always do in to some schedule before I work or study.
✓ Yes, of course, my MBTI is INFG and I always follow some schedule before I work or study.
句中“do in to some schedule”表达不正确,应该使用“follow some schedule”表示遵循计划。此外,缺少逗号分隔“Yes, of course”。
× Hmm actually I didn't thought about this question before but I think they are lazy.
✓ Hmm actually I didn't think about this question before but I think they are lazy.
“didn't”后面应接动词原形,不能用过去式“thought”,正确用法是“didn't think”。
× For example my brother is lazy so he don't like making plans.
✓ For example, my brother is lazy so he doesn't like making plans.
主语“he”是第三人称单数,谓语动词应使用“doesn't”而不是“don't”。
× I prefer Middle East on the paper because when I was a junior high school student, I prepared for the college entrance exam.
✓ I prefer making lists on paper because when I was a junior high school student, I prepared for the college entrance exam.
“Middle East”显然是错误的词,应为“making lists”。此外,“on the paper”应改为“on paper”,更符合习惯用法。
× I plan on the paper and I think it's a good way to push me out. Push me.
✓ I plan on paper and I think it's a good way to motivate me.
“push me out”表达不清且不合适,应该用“motivate me”表示激励自己。去掉重复的“Push me”。