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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

No, I'm not really keen on making a list when I shop. I prefer to shopping freely and discovering something new. I think making a list in shop for shopping will make me under control and it loads of flexible.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Yes, I really like to making a list when I'm working or study. It can really save time and effort and also it improves my efficiency when I'm work. Following the list steps also make me carefully working and more efficiently.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

Because they don't like organize something and it makes their under control. Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to do something flexibility and also they want to find something unusual or special 1 making a list where restrictive then.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I prefer to make a list on my phone because using a digital app is more convenient and easy to carry. I can edit it everywhere. For example, if I need write something important or notice some important tasks, I can add it in my phone.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“prefer to shopping”应为“prefer to shop”,且表达“it loads of flexible”不清晰。建议注意动词形式和表达的准确性,同时回答应更简洁自然。

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to shop freely and discover new things.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中动词形式错误较多,如“like to making”应为“like making”,且句子结构不够清晰。建议加强语法准确性,使用连贯的句子表达观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like making lists when I work or study because they help me save time and improve my efficiency.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达错误较多,句子不通顺,且逻辑不清晰。建议学习正确的句子结构,使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be flexible and enjoy finding unusual or special things without restrictions.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容具体,但有小的语法错误,如“need write”应为“need to write”。建议注意介词和不定式的正确使用,使表达更准确。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because digital apps are convenient and easy to carry. I can edit my lists anytime and add important tasks whenever needed.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× I prefer to shopping freely and discovering something new.

I prefer to shop freely and discover something new.

动词prefer后面接动词不定式to do,不能用动名词形式doing。这里应使用动词原形shop和discover。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I think making a list in shop for shopping will make me under control and it loads of flexible.

I think making a list when shopping will help me stay in control and be more flexible.

短语中in shop用法错误,应使用when shopping表示“购物时”;under control前应加stay表示“保持控制”;loads of flexible用法错误,应该用be more flexible表示“更灵活”。

Verb + -ing form

× Yes, I really like to making a list when I'm working or study.

Yes, I really like making a list when I'm working or studying.

动词like后面接动名词making,而不是to making;study应改为现在分词studying以保持与前面working一致的形式。

Present tense issue

× It can really save time and effort and also it improves my efficiency when I'm work.

It can really save time and effort and also it improves my efficiency when I'm working.

短语when I'm work中,work应使用现在分词working,表示正在进行的动作。

Verb + -ing form

× Following the list steps also make me carefully working and more efficiently.

Following the list steps also makes me work carefully and more efficiently.

主语Following the list steps是单数,谓语动词应为makes;make后接动词原形work,而不是副词carefully后接动名词working;more efficiently是副词短语修饰动词。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Because they don't like organize something and it makes their under control.

Because they don't like to organize things and it makes them lose control.

like后接动词不定式to organize;organize后应接复数名词things;it makes their under control表达不正确,应改为it makes them lose control,意为“使他们失去控制”。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Because they don't like organize something and it makes their under control.

Because they don't like to organize things and it makes them lose control.

their是形容词性物主代词,不能单独作宾语,应该用宾格them。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to do something flexibility and also they want to find something unusual or special 1 making a list where restrictive then.

Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to do things flexibly and also want to find something unusual or special rather than making a list which is restrictive.

prefer后接动词不定式或动名词,这里用do things flexibly;flexibility是名词,需用副词flexibly修饰动词do;句中1应为rather than,表示“而不是”;making a list where restrictive表达不正确,应改为making a list which is restrictive。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because using a digital app is more convenient and easy to carry.

I prefer to make a list on my phone because using a digital app is more convenient and easy to carry.

此句无明显语法错误,符合语法规则。

Verb + -ing form

× I can edit it everywhere. For example, if I need write something important or notice some important tasks, I can add it in my phone.

I can edit it everywhere. For example, if I need to write something important or notice some important tasks, I can add them to my phone.

need后应接动词不定式to write;notice后应接宾语some important tasks;add后接宾语时应用复数them代替it;add to my phone表示“添加到手机里”,而不是in my phone。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

EasyUncomplicated; Docile; Vulnerable; Leisurely
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
SpecialExceptional; Distinctive; Momentous; Specific
UnusualUncommon
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