Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always make a list when I shop because I will always forget what I want to buy. So make a list when I shop can make me remember that.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always make a Les for my work because it's help me stay organized and focused when I have a clear list. I know exactly what times I need to complete, which improve my efficiency. For example, I can paper right? Important jobs and avoid forgetting anything important.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Some people don't like making list because they find it time consuming and boring. For example, they may feel that writing things down takes too many time and makes them lose focus on more important task.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone because when I use my phone, I often get destructive by games or other apps. This wastes a lot of time, so writing on paper helps me stay focused and organized.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“make a list when I shop can make me remember that”应改为“making a list helps me remember what I need to buy”。建议注意句子结构,避免重复表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember the items I need to buy and prevents me from forgetting anything important.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有多处语法和表达错误,如“Les”应为“list”,“it's help”应为“it helps”,“what times I need to complete”表达不清。建议加强语法准确性和表达清晰度。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused. When I have a clear list, I know exactly which tasks to complete and by when, which improves my efficiency. For example, I can prioritize important jobs and avoid forgetting anything.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较好,但存在语法错误,如“takes too many time”应为“takes too much time”,“more important task”应为“more important tasks”。建议注意单复数和词汇搭配。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and boring. For example, they may feel that writing things down takes too much time and distracts them from more important tasks.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中“get destructive by games”表达错误,应为“get distracted by games”。建议注意词汇的正确使用和表达的准确性。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone because when I use my phone, I often get distracted by games or other apps. Writing on paper helps me stay focused and organized.
× So make a list when I shop can make me remember that.
✓ So making a list when I shop can help me remember that.
这里的主语是动词短语,应该使用动名词形式'making',而不是动词原形'make'。动名词作为主语时,表示动作的概念。
× Yes, I always make a Les for my work because it's help me stay organized and focused when I have a clear list.
✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused when I have a clear list.
'Les'应为'list',是单数形式。'it's'应为'it',主语单数,谓语动词用第三人称单数形式'helps'。
× I know exactly what times I need to complete, which improve my efficiency.
✓ I know exactly what tasks I need to complete, which improves my efficiency.
'times'应为'tasks',表示任务。谓语动词应与主语一致,'which'指代前面的内容,谓语用第三人称单数'improves'。
× Some people don't like making list because they find it time consuming and boring.
✓ Some people don't like making lists because they find it time consuming and boring.
'list'应为复数形式'lists',表示泛指多种列表。
× they may feel that writing things down takes too many time and makes them lose focus on more important task.
✓ they may feel that writing things down takes too much time and makes them lose focus on more important tasks.
'time'是不可数名词,不能用'many'修饰,应使用'much'。'task'应为复数形式'tasks',表示多个任务。
× I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone because when I use my phone, I often get destructive by games or other apps.
✓ I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone because when I use my phone, I am often distracted by games or other apps.
'get destructive'用法错误,正确表达应为'be distracted',表示被分心。