List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit repetitive and has grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and grammatically correct by using simple past or present tense consistently. Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'because it is easier' twice. Use linking words like 'so' to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember all the items I need. So, I can easily show the list to the shopkeeper and get everything quickly.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and has many repetitions. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to explain why making a list helps. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work because it acts like a timetable. This way, I can organize my tasks and know exactly what I need to do at different times.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases like 'some people are not allowed to'. Focus on giving a clear reason why some people dislike making lists. Use linking words like 'because' to explain their opinion clearly.

Ví dụ: Some people do not like making lists because they feel it wastes time. They prefer to shop or work spontaneously without planning.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Try to express your preference clearly and explain reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid repeating words and incomplete sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer both paper and phone lists because sometimes paper lists can get lost, but lists on my phone are safe and easy to access anytime.

× Yes, I make a list when I went to the shopping because it is easier because it is easier when we shop the all the things that we want to buy is ready to get and also we can show to the shopkeeper and shopkeeper will give the things that we want to buy.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go shopping because it is easier when we shop; all the things that we want to buy are ready to get and also we can show the list to the shopkeeper and the shopkeeper will give the things that we want to buy.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'went' (past tense) with 'make a list' which is in present tense. Also, 'the all the things' is incorrect; it should be 'all the things'. The verb 'is' should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject 'things'. The phrase 'show to the shopkeeper' should be 'show the list to the shopkeeper'. The sentence needs to maintain present tense consistency and correct subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, I make a list when I I want to do work.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I want to do work.

There is a repetition of 'I' which is unnecessary. The sentence is otherwise correct in present tense.

× It is like a timetable.

✓ It is like a timetable.

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no correction.

× We should, we should do our work on a time to time when we we have to when we made our list, we also we, we can recognize the what work we have to do.

✓ We should do our work from time to time. When we make our list, we can also recognize what work we have to do.

The phrase 'on a time to time' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'from time to time'. The sentence is also run-on and confusing; it needs to be split into clearer sentences. 'When we made our list' should be 'when we make our list' to maintain present tense consistency.

× Some people are not allowed to.

✓ Some people are not allowed to make lists.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. The pronoun 'to' is used without a verb, making the sentence incomplete. Adding 'make lists' clarifies the meaning.

× Some people do not like to make a list because they think that if we make a list of our time will be wasted instead of making they are going to shop like this only.

✓ Some people do not like to make a list because they think that if we make a list, our time will be wasted; instead, they prefer to shop like this only.

The original sentence is confusing and has incorrect conjunction and preposition usage. 'Make a list of our time' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list'. The sentence is also run-on and needs to be split for clarity.

× I I prefer both because sometime Lister is A4 Lister is lost or anything another we showed them type on a phone, a phone will never got lost or anything that we have written on in the phone that will never.

✓ I prefer both because sometimes the A4 list is lost or something else happens, but if we type it on a phone, the list will never get lost or disappear; whatever we have written on the phone will always be there.

The sentence has repetition ('I I'), incorrect word forms ('Lister' instead of 'list'), and incorrect verb forms ('will never got lost' should be 'will never get lost'). The sentence is also run-on and unclear; it needs to be restructured for clarity and correct grammar.