List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「helps me to do efficiently」は「helps me shop efficiently」など具体的に言い換えると良いでしょう。また、例の部分もより具体的に説明すると効果的です。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me shop efficiently. For example, I don't have to waste time deciding what to buy while I'm at the store.

Gợi ý: 回答が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多いです。「make a rest」ではなく「make a list」や「make a schedule」と言うべきです。また、内容が曖昧で具体性に欠けています。質問に対して明確に答え、理由や効果を具体的に述べる練習をしましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list for my work. It helps me stay organized and complete my tasks on time.

Gợi ý: 理由の説明が繰り返されており、表現も不自然です。「confused to make the list」ではなく「find it difficult to make a list」など正しい表現を使いましょう。また、理由を一つに絞り、具体的に説明すると良いです。

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they find it hard to stick to a schedule that suits their lifestyle.

Gợi ý: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法や表現が不自然です。「without times and places」は意味が不明瞭なので、「anytime and anywhere」と言い換えましょう。また、文を完結させることが必要です。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I can access them anytime and anywhere using my smartphone.

× I always make a list before I go shopping because I like to make some plans before I do something and also it helps me to do efficiently.

✓ I always make a list before I go shopping because I like to make some plans before I do something and also it helps me to do things efficiently.

The phrase 'do efficiently' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'things' after 'do' clarifies the object of the verb and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× For example, I don't need to think about like how to do or what should I do.

✓ For example, I don't need to think about how to do it or what I should do.

The phrase 'think about like how to do' is incorrect. 'Like' is unnecessary here and 'how to do it' is clearer. Also, the word order in 'what should I do' should be 'what I should do' in indirect questions.

× Yes, I always make a rest for my work and also it seems always be good working because I am actually I'm good at making some schedules and also I prefer to use it to finish.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work and it always seems to work well because I am actually good at making schedules and I prefer to use it to finish tasks.

'Make a rest' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make a list'. 'It seems always be good working' is ungrammatical; it should be 'it always seems to work well'. 'Making some schedules' is better as 'making schedules'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× This is because some people might be confused to make the list.

✓ This is because some people might be confused about making the list.

The verb 'confused' is usually followed by the preposition 'about' when referring to the cause of confusion. Also, 'to make the list' should be 'making the list' after 'confused about'.

× This is because sometimes making a schedule that fitted on their own self is tough to keep.

✓ This is because sometimes making a schedule that fits themselves is tough to keep.

'Fitted on their own self' is incorrect. The verb should be 'fits' (present tense) to agree with 'schedule', and 'themselves' is the correct reflexive pronoun here. 'On their own self' is unnatural and incorrect.

× I prefer to make a schedule with digital devices.

✓ I prefer to make a schedule using digital devices.

The preposition 'with' is less appropriate here; 'using' better expresses the means by which the schedule is made.

× This is because I can use the tools without times and places and I need to use just the devices like smartphone or.

✓ This is because I can use the tools anytime and anywhere, and I just need to use devices like a smartphone.

'Without times and places' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'anytime and anywhere'. Also, 'like smartphone or' is incomplete and should be 'like a smartphone'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.