List— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes I do because it help me have to buy things. This helps me.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. I usually make a list for my work because it helps me work hard working and don't forget knowledge.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Yeah, in my opinion, I think people don't like making list because it take some minutes for it. So some people don't know.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient and faster than on paper. And when I make a list my phone I can see.
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Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, tránh lặp từ và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need to buy and saves me time at the store.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và giải thích cụ thể hơn về lợi ích của việc làm danh sách công việc.
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget important tasks.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và giải thích rõ hơn về lý do mọi người không thích làm danh sách.
Ví dụ: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because it takes time and they may find it boring or unnecessary.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời khá tốt nhưng câu cuối cùng không rõ nghĩa và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient and faster than using paper, plus I can easily edit or check my list anytime.
Ngữ pháp
× Yes I do because it help me have to buy things.
✓ Yes I do because it helps me to buy things.
The verb 'help' should be in the third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'have to buy things' is awkward; 'to buy things' is clearer and grammatically correct.
× This helps me.
✓ This helps me.
No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct.
× I usually make a list for my work because it helps me work hard working and don't forget knowledge.
✓ I usually make a list for my work because it helps me work hard and not forget knowledge.
The phrase 'work hard working' is incorrect; 'work hard' is the correct form. Also, 'don't forget knowledge' should be 'not forget knowledge' to maintain parallel structure and correct verb form.
× I think people don't like making list because it take some minutes for it.
✓ I think people don't like making lists because it takes some minutes.
'List' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity. The verb 'take' should be 'takes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.
× So some people don't know.
✓ So some people don't know why.
The sentence is incomplete and unclear; adding 'why' clarifies the meaning and completes the thought.
× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient and faster than on paper.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient and faster than making one on paper.
The comparison is incomplete; adding 'making one' clarifies the comparison between making lists on phone and on paper.
× And when I make a list my phone I can see.
✓ And when I make a list on my phone, I can see it easily.
The sentence is incomplete and missing preposition 'on' and object 'it'; adding these completes the sentence and clarifies meaning.
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