List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly and clearly, for example, say "Yes, I usually make a shopping list when I have time because it helps me remember what to buy." Avoid vague phrases like "call the silver" which is confusing. Use simple linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list when I have time because it helps me remember what to buy. However, if I am in a hurry, I might just call a friend to ask for recommendations.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical mistakes and lacks coherence. Use linking words like "but" or "however" properly and correct verb forms. Also, explain why you feel frustrated to enrich your answer.

Ví dụ: I often make a list to plan my study for exams. However, sometimes I give up the plan because I feel frustrated when I cannot follow it strictly.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to complete your ideas and avoid repetition. Use clear linking words like "Firstly" and "Secondly" and provide specific reasons with examples.

Ví dụ: From my perspective, some people don't like making lists because they are not well organized. For example, they often lose their lists. Another reason is that they prefer to remember things mentally.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts and use correct verb forms. Also, explain why you prefer your phone and compare it briefly with paper lists.

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very convenient. For example, I can quickly add events to my notes and it helps me remember them. However, sometimes I feel that writing on paper is more effective for memory.

× If I'm available I will make this to make me have a clear understanding of what I need to do, and if I'm not available I will just call the silver to recommend things.

✓ If I'm available, I will make this list to help me have a clear understanding of what I need to do, and if I'm not available, I will just call the seller to recommend things.

The modal verb 'will' is correctly used to express future intention. However, the sentence has other issues such as missing commas and incorrect word choice ('silver' should be 'seller'). Adding commas improves clarity. 'Make this' is vague; specifying 'make this list' clarifies the meaning.

× I often list down the plan when I need to prepare for my exam.

✓ I often list down the plans when I need to prepare for my exam.

The phrase 'list down' is informal but acceptable; however, 'plan' should be plural 'plans' to match the context of multiple items. The verb form is correct here.

× However, sometimes I will just give up the plan because this make me feel frustrating for all the time.

✓ However, sometimes I will just give up the plan because it makes me feel frustrated all the time.

The subject 'this' should be 'it' to refer to 'the plan'. The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Frustrating' is an adjective describing something that causes frustration; here, the feeling is 'frustrated', so the past participle adjective is correct.

× For my perspective, there are several reasons to that.

✓ From my perspective, there are several reasons for that.

The phrase 'For my perspective' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'From'. Also, 'reasons to that' should be 'reasons for that' to be grammatically correct.

× Firstly, it's about some people are not well organized, so for example they will they will lose the same in everywhere and another reason is that they.

✓ Firstly, it's because some people are not well organized; for example, they will lose the same things everywhere, and another reason is that they...

The sentence is fragmented and repetitive ('they will they will'). 'It's about' should be 'it's because'. 'Lose the same in everywhere' is unclear; 'lose the same things everywhere' is clearer. The sentence ends abruptly, indicating incomplete thought.

× I lie this down on the phone because it's very convenient for me.

✓ I write this down on the phone because it's very convenient for me.

The verb 'lie' is incorrectly used; the correct verb is 'write' when referring to recording information. 'Lie' means to recline or tell an untruth, which is not intended here.

× For example, when I have some events, I just write down the event in my notes and help me to memory.

✓ For example, when I have some events, I just write down the event in my notes to help me remember.

The phrase 'help me to memory' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'help me remember'. Also, 'write down the event in my notes' is acceptable, but 'in my notes' is better than 'on my notes'.

× However, I feel that written is.

✓ However, I feel that writing it down is better.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'writing it down is better' completes the thought and makes the sentence grammatically correct.