List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但存在语法错误和重复用词，如“save times”和“show more efficiently efficiently”。建议注意语法正确性，避免重复，并且使句子更流畅自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me stay organized and save time. For example, it prevents me from forgetting important items and allows me to shop more efficiently.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较完整，但存在语法错误，如“a lot work”应为“a lot of work”，以及“avoid forgotten”应为“avoid forgetting”。建议加强语法准确性，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when I have a lot of work to do. It helps me concentrate better and improve my efficiency. For example, by following the list, I can avoid forgetting important tasks and complete everything on time.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“don't like make lists”和“make them prior”。建议注意动词形式和句子完整性，表达时要清晰具体。

Ví dụ: Actually, I think some people don't like making lists because it depends on their personality. For example, some feel that making lists takes too much time and makes them feel pressured.

Gợi ý: 回答中多处词汇错误，如“on people”应为“on paper”，“unlooking phone”表达不清。建议加强词汇准确性和句子结构，避免重复和错误。

Ví dụ: Actually, I usually prefer to make a list on paper because it is convenient and I can see everything clearly at a glance. Additionally, using paper doesn't require unlocking my phone or opening apps, which saves time.

× Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and save times.

✓ Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and save time.

“times” 应为不可数名词“time”，表示时间，不能用复数形式。

× For example, I. I can avoid forgotten important items and show more efficiently efficiently.

✓ For example, I can avoid forgetting important items and shop more efficiently.

句子结构混乱，‘I. I’重复且不完整，‘forgotten’用法错误，应为动名词‘forgetting’，‘show’应为‘shop’，‘efficiently’重复。

× Yes, I always make a list where I have a lot work to do.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I have a lot of work to do.

‘a lot work’缺少介词‘of’，应为‘a lot of work’。

× For example, by following the list I can avoid forgotten important items and complete my tasks on time.

✓ For example, by following the list, I can avoid forgetting important items and complete my tasks on time.

‘forgotten’用法错误，应为动名词‘forgetting’。

× Actually, I think some people don't like make lists because it depends on their personality.

✓ Actually, I think some people don't like to make lists because it depends on their personality.

‘like’后面应接不定式‘to make’或动名词‘making’，此处用不定式更合适。

× For example, some people feel that takes too much time and make them prior.

✓ For example, some people feel that it takes too much time and makes them procrastinate.

缺少主语‘it’，‘make them prior’表达不正确，应为‘makes them procrastinate’（使他们拖延）。

× Actually, I usually prefer to make a list on people because it is convenient and I can see everything clearly at a glance.

✓ Actually, I usually prefer to make a list on paper because it is convenient and I can see everything clearly at a glance.

‘people’（人们）用错，应为‘paper’（纸）。

× Additionally, using people doesn't need doesn't require unlooking phone or opening an apps which save time.

✓ Additionally, using paper doesn't require unlocking the phone or opening apps, which saves time.

‘people’应为‘paper’，‘doesn't need doesn't require’重复且错误，‘unlooking’应为‘unlocking’，‘an apps’应为‘apps’，‘which save time’主谓不一致，应为‘saves time’。