Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Well, it depends. Sometimes I will make a list if there is something that I really need to buy, but most of the time I just prefer to walk around and see if there is something that attractive.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make a list every day when I arrive at office. Sometimes I will make plans for the month or for the week. I think it really helps me to manage my time better.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I suppose maybe they find this way too limited. They want to do something that more creative and just do things according to the changes.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient and eco friendly. Mobile phones are more convenient to carry out than papers. I can type down my thoughts whenever I want.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答时应避免语法错误,如“something that attractive”应为“something attractive”。此外,回答可以更简洁自然,避免冗余。
Ví dụ: It depends. Sometimes I make a list when I need specific items, but usually I prefer to browse and see if anything interesting catches my eye.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰,但可以使用更多连接词使表达更连贯,如“and”或“which”。同时,细节可以更具体。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list every day when I arrive at the office, and sometimes I plan for the week or month ahead, which really helps me manage my time more effectively.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“something that more creative”应为“something more creative”。建议使用更准确的表达,并增加连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: I suppose some people find making lists too limiting because they prefer to be more creative and adapt their plans according to changes.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容重复,如“more convenient”出现两次。建议避免重复,使用多样词汇,并注意表达自然流畅。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and environmentally friendly. I can easily jot down my thoughts anytime without carrying extra paper.
× ...if there is something that attractive.
✓ ...if there is something that is attractive.
这里缺少系动词“is”,导致形容词“attractive”无法正确修饰前面的名词“something”。应补充“is”使句子完整。
× ...when I arrive at office.
✓ ...when I arrive at the office.
“office”前缺少定冠词“the”,因为这里指特定的办公室,英语中需要加冠词。
× I suppose maybe they find this way too limited.
✓ I suppose maybe they find this way too limiting.
“limited”是过去分词,表示被限制的状态;而这里应使用现在分词“limiting”,表示“限制人的”,更符合语境。
× They want to do something that more creative and just do things according to the changes.
✓ They want to do something more creative and just do things according to the changes.
“that”在此处多余,且“more creative”作为形容词短语直接修饰“something”,不需要“that”。
× Mobile phones are more convenient to carry out than papers.
✓ Mobile phones are more convenient to carry than papers.
“carry out”是一个固定短语,意为“执行、完成”,此处应使用“carry”表示“携带”,所以应去掉“out”。