List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法和表达不够自然，有些句子结构混乱。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。例如，将“save more times”改为“save time”，并注意冠词和介词的使用。

Ví dụ: I usually make a shopping list when I go to a big mall because I buy expensive and large items. This helps me save time and not forget anything. However, when I go to a nearby supermarket for snacks, I don't need a list because I know exactly what I want.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，句子较长且缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用简单句表达观点，并用连接词如“because”、“so”来增强逻辑性。同时，注意时态和冠词的正确使用。

Ví dụ: I always make a work list that includes my goals for this year, this month, and even the next five years. It helps me focus on my projects and clearly know what I need to do. However, my list is often hard to complete, which motivates me to take on more projects.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，如将“someone”改为“some people”，并注意动词形式和搭配。同时，使用连接词如“for example”和“additionally”来组织内容。

Ví dụ: I think some people find making lists stressful because it puts pressure on them to complete many tasks. For example, they may worry about unfinished work. Additionally, some people prefer to live in the moment and don't want to worry about the future.

Gợi ý: 回答中句子结构混乱，表达不连贯，且有语法错误。建议分成几句简短的句子，清晰表达观点，并注意词汇搭配和语法，如“it is easy to lose paper lists”。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me at home and school. This way, I can check my list anytime, which helps me stay organized. Unlike paper lists, which are easy to lose or forget, my phone keeps all my lists in one place.

× Actually, I make a list when I go to the big shopping mall because I always buy some expensive and big items so the list can let me save more times and don't forget everything.

✓ Actually, I make a list when I go to the big shopping mall because I always buy some expensive and big items so the list can help me save more time and not forget anything.

这里“save more times”中的“times”应为不可数名词“time”，表示时间，不能用复数形式。应使用“save more time”。另外，“don't forget everything”表达不准确，应改为“not forget anything”，表示不忘记任何东西。

× But if I just to go to a supermarket nearby my house or and buy a few of snacks, I don't need to make this because I know everything I want.

✓ But if I just go to a supermarket near my house and buy a few snacks, I don't need to make one because I know everything I want.

“just to go”中“to”多余，应去掉。短语“nearby my house”应改为“near my house”，因为“nearby”通常作副词或形容词用，不直接接名词。连接词“or and”错误，应选用“and”。“a few of snacks”中“of”多余，应为“a few snacks”。“make this”表达不清，应改为“make one”，指代“list”。

× Actually, I will always make the working list and it always including the goals in this year, this month or the next five years.

✓ Actually, I always make a work list and it always includes the goals for this year, this month, or the next five years.

“will always make”时态不合适，习惯性动作用一般现在时“always make”。“the working list”应为“a work list”，更自然。动词“including”应改为“includes”，主谓一致。介词“in this year”应改为“for this year”，表示目标的时间范围。

× It can let me focus for the project and can let me know what things should I do very clearly.

✓ It helps me focus on the project and lets me know very clearly what things I should do.

“can let me”表达不自然，改为“helps me”和“lets me”更合适。介词“focus for”应为“focus on”。“what things should I do”语序错误，陈述句应为“what things I should do”。

× But my list is always very difficult to finish.

✓ But my list is always very difficult to complete.

“difficult to finish”语法上无误，但“finish”多用于完成具体动作，“complete”更适合完成任务或项目。此处为表达更准确的用词建议。

× I think someone find making this stressful because it makes them feel pressured and to completely many tasks.

✓ I think some people find making lists stressful because it makes them feel pressured and to complete many tasks.

“someone”应改为“some people”，表示一些人。短语“making this”不明确，应为“making lists”。“to completely many tasks”中“completely”应为动词不定式“to complete”，且“many tasks”前应有动词。

× Additionally, I think someone prefer to leave on the moment, they don't want to worry about the future.

✓ Additionally, I think some people prefer to live in the moment; they don't want to worry about the future.

“someone”应为“some people”。“leave on the moment”应为“live in the moment”，表达活在当下。句子中两个分句应用分号或句号分开。

× I prefer to make a list on the phone, you know, I always carry it with me at home or at school so that I can check my list every time and it helps me become more organized and the reasons unlike the paper, because it will very easily to be lost or forgotten and my phone can let my list in one place and I can sit.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone. You know, I always carry it with me at home or at school so that I can check my list anytime. It helps me become more organized. Unlike paper, which can be easily lost or forgotten, my phone keeps my list in one place and I can access it anytime.

“on the phone”应为“on my phone”，表示使用自己的手机。句子过长且结构混乱，应拆分成多个句子。短语“the reasons unlike the paper”表达不清，应改为“Unlike paper”。“it will very easily to be lost”语序错误，应为“can be easily lost”。“my phone can let my list in one place and I can sit”表达不通顺，应改为“my phone keeps my list in one place and I can access it anytime”。