List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“think make list”应为“think making a list”，时态混用（was shopping应为am shopping或when I shop）。建议注意时态一致性，使用更自然的表达方式，并避免冗长句子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a list before shopping because it helps me remember exactly what I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary items.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如“tasks to download”应为“tasks to complete”，“urgency assignment”应为“urgent assignments”，“more efficiency”应为“more efficient”。建议使用正确的词汇和语法，句子结构更清晰。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list of urgent assignments and use it as my timetable. This helps me stay focused and work more efficiently.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够清晰，存在语法错误，如“may be have”应为“may have”，“making this”应为“making lists”。建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，避免重复。

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they think it wastes time. Others may be very efficient without lists, so they feel it's unnecessary.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达混乱，如“it has elimination of where I am”不明确。建议完整表达观点，使用连贯的句子，并避免语法错误。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient. For example, when I'm at a restaurant, I can quickly add items without needing a pen or paper.

× I think make list is a very efficient way for me to clearly know what I need to buy when I was shopping and this help avoid me buying some unnecessary things.

✓ I think making a list is a very efficient way for me to clearly know what I need to buy when I am shopping and this helps me avoid buying some unnecessary things.

这里“make list”缺少冠词且“list”应为单数，应该用“making a list”。“help”主语是单数，动词应加-s变为“helps”。另外，时态应与现在购物时相符，使用现在时“am shopping”。

× I think make list is a very efficient way for me to clearly know what I need to buy when I was shopping and this help avoid me buying some unnecessary things.

✓ I think making a list is a very efficient way for me to clearly know what I need to buy when I am shopping and this helps me avoid buying some unnecessary things.

句中“when I was shopping”描述的是一般现在时的习惯动作，应该用现在时“when I am shopping”。

× I think make list is a very efficient way for me to clearly know what I need to buy when I was shopping and this help avoid me buying some unnecessary things.

✓ I think making a list is a very efficient way for me to clearly know what I need to buy when I am shopping and this helps me avoid buying some unnecessary things.

动词“make”在此处作动名词使用，应改为“making”。

× I will make a study list and I will use it as my timetable.

✓ I will make a study list and use it as my timetable.

句中“will make”和“will use”连用时，第二个“will”可省略，保持句子简洁。

× So because of this way I will be more efficiency and more concentrate on my tasks.

✓ So because of this, I will be more efficient and more concentrated on my tasks.

“efficiency”是名词，形容词形式应为“efficient”。“concentrate”是动词，形容词形式应为“concentrated”。

× It will help me to improve.

✓ It will help me improve.

“help”后面直接接动词原形，不需要“to”。

× some people don't like making this because they think it is a waste of their time

✓ some people don't like making lists because they think it is a waste of their time

“this”指代不明确，应改为复数名词“lists”以明确指代。

× they may be have very high efficiency even though they don't make a list so they think it is unnecessary.

✓ they may have very high efficiency even though they don't make a list, so they think it is unnecessary.

“may be have”结构错误，应改为“may have”。

× And for other people who don't have urgent assignments they may be not making this too.

✓ And for other people who don't have urgent assignments, they may not be making lists either.

“may be not making”应改为“may not be making”，且“this”指代不明，应改为“lists”。

× I think for myself, I prefer to make a list on my phone because first using a phone is more efficiently because if I use a paper, I need to find a pen 1st and it has elimination of where I am.

✓ I think for myself, I prefer to make a list on my phone because first, using a phone is more efficient. If I use paper, I need to find a pen first, and it eliminates the problem of where I am.

“efficiently”是副词，形容词形式应为“efficient”。“a paper”应为不可数名词“paper”。“1st”应写为“first”。“it has elimination of where I am”表达不清，应改为“it eliminates the problem of where I am”。