Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
I seldom make a list before I buy something because I can always remember, but if I have to buy things for a holiday or some other big event, I will make a list to.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
I make a list every day to organize my work. I also review yesterdays list to see which task I did finish so I can repeat or add them to today's list. And this method help me concentrate and manage my time efficiently.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Oh, I think people don't like making this because they don't see the benefits uh, clearly. For example for when they have unrelated tasks can feel overwhelming to organize them in all the list. Also making the list the same as actual burden rather than a helpful tool for managing time.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on my paper because I think this can add the practice time of writing and paper is more convenient to to erase or mark something and it's still natural.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答时应避免语法错误,如“make a list to”应为“make a list too”。此外,回答可以更简洁自然,避免重复表达。
Ví dụ: I rarely make a shopping list because I usually remember what I need. However, for big events like holidays, I always prepare a list to ensure I don't forget anything.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答中应注意时态和单复数形式,如“yesterdays list”应为“yesterday's list”,“help”应为“helps”。同时,连接词使用可以更自然。
Ví dụ: I make a list every day to organize my work. I also review yesterday's list to check which tasks I completed, so I can repeat or add them to today's list. This method helps me concentrate and manage my time efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够清晰,句子结构混乱。建议简化句子,明确表达观点,并使用连接词使逻辑更连贯。
Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they don't clearly see the benefits. For example, when tasks are unrelated, organizing them in one list can feel overwhelming. Also, some view lists as a burden rather than a helpful time management tool.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复词汇“to to”,表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构,使用更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because it gives me extra writing practice. Also, it's easier to erase or mark items, and it feels more natural than using a phone.
× I seldom make a list before I buy something because I can always remember, but if I have to buy things for a holiday or some other big event, I will make a list to.
✓ I seldom make a list before I buy something because I can always remember, but if I have to buy things for a holiday or some other big event, I will make a list too.
句末的“to”应为“too”,表示“也”,这是一个拼写错误,属于单复数问题中的词形错误。
× I also review yesterdays list to see which task I did finish so I can repeat or add them to today's list.
✓ I also review yesterday's list to see which tasks I did finish so I can repeat or add them to today's list.
“yesterdays”缺少所有格撇号,应为“yesterday's”;“task”应为复数“tasks”,因为后文用“them”指代多个任务。
× And this method help me concentrate and manage my time efficiently.
✓ And this method helps me concentrate and manage my time efficiently.
主语“method”是单数,谓语动词应加-s,变为“helps”,这是主谓一致问题。
× Oh, I think people don't like making this because they don't see the benefits uh, clearly.
✓ Oh, I think people don't like making lists because they don't see the benefits clearly.
“making this”不合适,应为“making lists”,指代制作清单,属于单复数使用错误。
× For example for when they have unrelated tasks can feel overwhelming to organize them in all the list.
✓ For example, when they have unrelated tasks, it can feel overwhelming to organize them all in the list.
原句结构混乱,缺少主语“it”,并且“in all the list”应为“all in the list”,调整语序使句子通顺。
× Also making the list the same as actual burden rather than a helpful tool for managing time.
✓ Also, making the list feels like an actual burden rather than a helpful tool for managing time.
原句缺少谓语动词,且“the same as actual burden”表达不当,改为“feels like an actual burden”更符合语法和表达习惯。
× I prefer to make a list on my paper because I think this can add the practice time of writing and paper is more convenient to to erase or mark something and it's still natural.
✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I think this can add practice time of writing, and paper is more convenient to erase or mark something and it's still natural.
“my paper”应为“paper”,表示纸张的泛指;“to to”重复,应删去一个“to”;“add the practice time”中“the”多余,应为“add practice time”。