Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I prefer to make lists when I shop because I have a weak memory so I can't remember the thing that I need to shop. And it also helps me to remember all thing as well as to remain in my budget so that I cannot buy any extra thing that I don't need and I will not regret it.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make to do lists so that I can remember each and everything what I what I have to do in my day so that I cannot forget anything or some important work that I have to do so I should do at right time.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Well, it depends on them. Because they have sharp memory, they can remember each and everything they have to perform in the day. Like for instance the task they have to do in in a day, they can remember that thing.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Well, I prefer to make list on my mobile phone because it is convenient and I have mobile phone. I keep my mobile with myself all the time and it give me a reminder that you have to perform this task after this task so that's why.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using more natural phrasing and avoiding repetition. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and be more specific about how lists help you. Also, correct minor grammar errors for better clarity.
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I tend to forget items easily. Moreover, it helps me stick to my budget and avoid buying unnecessary things, which I often regret later.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Your response is relevant but contains some grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and try to be concise while explaining how the list helps you manage your tasks.
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make to-do lists to keep track of my daily tasks. This way, I ensure that I don't forget any important work and complete everything on time.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but repetitive and lacks variety in vocabulary. Try to use linking words and more precise expressions to explain the reason clearly and avoid repeating the same phrases.
Ví dụ: Well, it depends on the person. Some people have a sharp memory, so they can easily remember all their daily tasks without needing a list.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using more natural expressions and correcting grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about the advantages of using your phone for lists.
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because it's convenient and always with me. Additionally, it sends reminders to help me complete tasks in order.
× I can't remember the thing that I need to shop.
✓ I can't remember the things that I need to shop.
The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items that need to be shopped for, not just one.
× And it also helps me to remember all thing as well as to remain in my budget so that I cannot buy any extra thing that I don't need and I will not regret it.
✓ And it also helps me to remember all things as well as to remain in my budget so that I cannot buy any extra things that I don't need and I will not regret it.
The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' when referring to multiple items; using singular here is incorrect.
× I usually make to do lists so that I can remember each and everything what I what I have to do in my day so that I cannot forget anything or some important work that I have to do so I should do at right time.
✓ I usually make to-do lists so that I can remember everything I have to do in my day so that I do not forget anything or any important work that I have to do at the right time.
The phrase 'each and everything what I what I have to do' is incorrect and redundant. It should be simplified to 'everything I have to do'. Also, 'so that I cannot forget' is incorrect; it should be 'so that I do not forget'. 'At right time' needs the article 'the' to be 'at the right time'.
× Like for instance the task they have to do in in a day, they can remember that thing.
✓ For instance, the tasks they have to do in a day, they can remember those things.
The phrase 'like for instance' is redundant; 'for instance' alone is sufficient. Also, 'in in a day' has a repeated preposition. 'That thing' should be plural 'those things' to match 'tasks'.
× I prefer to make list on my mobile phone because it is convenient and I have mobile phone.
✓ I prefer to make lists on my mobile phone because it is convenient and I have a mobile phone.
'Make list' should be 'make lists' to indicate the general action. Also, 'I have mobile phone' is missing the article 'a' before 'mobile phone'.
× I keep my mobile with myself all the time and it give me a reminder that you have to perform this task after this task so that's why.
✓ I keep my mobile with me all the time and it gives me a reminder that I have to perform this task after this task, so that's why.
'With myself' is incorrect; the correct reflexive pronoun is 'with me'. 'It give' should be 'it gives' to agree with the singular subject. Also, 'you have to perform' should be 'I have to perform' to maintain first person perspective.