List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答有些语法错误，表达不够清晰，建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用连词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping. For example, if I want to buy fruits or vegetables, I write down their names to find them easily.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然，建议先直接回答问题，然后用具体例子支持，注意时态和句子结构。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list for my studies. For instance, I write down the subjects I need to focus on, like math or science, to organize my work better.

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯，表达含糊，建议用更清晰的句子表达原因，并使用连接词使逻辑更清楚。

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it takes too much time. Instead, they prefer to remember things in their mind.

Gợi ý: 回答中有拼写错误和语法问题，建议先明确表达偏好，再说明原因，句子要简洁且连贯。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient. However, sometimes I use paper because I find it easier to write and see everything clearly.

× Of course, when I go shop, I will make a list after I arrive the shopping mall, when I go to the market, if I want to buy some fruits or vegetables and I will write down the name and to find them more.

✓ Of course, when I go shopping, I make a list after I arrive at the shopping mall. When I go to the market, if I want to buy some fruits or vegetables, I write down the names to find them more easily.

动词go后面需要用动名词形式shopping，表示正在进行的动作。动词arrive后面需要加介词at表示到达某地。句子中时态应保持一致，描述习惯动作用一般现在时。

× Absolutely always I make a list about what or in my study. When I was in study I will wrote the aim of my study. Which one I will write math or science?

✓ I always make a list about what to study. When I was studying, I wrote the aim of my study. I would write either math or science.

过去时态的动词write的过去式是wrote，不能用will wrote。句子中时态混乱，应根据时间点使用正确时态。

× Absolutely always I make a list about what or in my study.

✓ I always make a list about what to study.

介词about后面应接名词或动名词短语，in my study用法不当，应改为to study表示学习内容。

× Which one I will write math or science?

✓ I will write either math or science.

句子结构不完整，缺少主语和谓语的正确顺序，应该调整为完整句子。

× Sometimes some people so write down make a list, it's too difficult for them because they have not enough time to write down the list someone they have to make something in their mind.

✓ Sometimes some people find it too difficult to make a list because they do not have enough time to write it down, so they have to keep it in their mind.

句子结构混乱，缺少连词和正确的表达方式，导致意思不清晰，需要调整句子结构使其通顺。

× because they have not enough time to write down the list someone they have to make something in their mind.

✓ because they do not have enough time to write down the list, so they have to keep it in their mind.

短语have not enough time应改为do not have enough time，someone用法错误，应使用so或therefore表示因果关系。

× And sometimes I will make the lease on my phone because it will be more convenient.

✓ And sometimes I will make the list on my phone because it is more convenient.

单词lease拼写错误，应为list。介词on my phone使用正确。

× But sometimes we will I will make a lease on paper because it has a more onion in it and make on phone is hard for me.

✓ But sometimes I will make a list on paper because it has more options, and making a list on the phone is hard for me.

单词lease拼写错误，应为list。onion拼写错误，应为options。句子结构不完整，需调整使其通顺。