Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, and when I when I shop, I, I make a list by my thing. I, I don't write it on the paper. This come this make me understand, I will buy by some things.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I, I, I, I make a list for, for my, for my work. This make me efficiently and let me what can I do?
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Because men make a leaked is very boring and trouble. Uh, if you if people like me a freedom man, I can make a list.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on my phone because this is very convenient and so easy. Just I want I can immediately look my lips.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复和语法错误,表达不够清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题,避免重复,并使用正确的句子结构。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list in my mind instead of writing it down. This helps me remember what I need to buy.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不完整。建议使用完整句子,清楚说明做清单的目的和效果。
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work. It helps me stay organized and complete tasks efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不清晰,语法和词汇使用错误较多。建议明确表达观点,使用恰当词汇,并避免含糊不清。
Ví dụ: Some people find making lists boring and troublesome because they prefer to work freely without restrictions.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚,但有语法错误和用词不当。建议使用正确的句子结构和词汇,表达更自然。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very convenient and I can check it anytime I want.
× I make a list by my thing.
✓ I make a list of my things.
这里的 'thing' 应该用复数形式 'things',因为通常购物时会列出多样物品。'by' 也用错了,正确搭配是 'make a list of',表示列出某些东西。
× This come this make me understand, I will buy by some things.
✓ This helps me understand what things I will buy.
句子结构混乱,缺少主语和谓语的正确搭配。'This come this make me understand' 不符合英语语法,应改为 'This helps me understand'。另外,'buy by some things' 应改为 'buy some things'。
× This make me efficiently and let me what can I do?
✓ This makes me efficient and lets me know what I can do.
主语 'This' 是单数,谓语动词应加 -s,变为 'makes' 和 'lets'。'efficiently' 是副词,需改为形容词 'efficient'。'let me what can I do' 语序错误,应为 'lets me know what I can do'。
× Because men make a leaked is very boring and trouble.
✓ Because making a list is very boring and troublesome.
'men make a leaked' 语法错误,应该是动名词短语 'making a list'。'leaked' 是形容词,意思是 '泄露的',不合适。'trouble' 应改为形容词 'troublesome'。
× if people like me a freedom man, I can make a list.
✓ If people like me are free men, I can make a list.
'people like me a freedom man' 结构错误,缺少动词。应为 'people like me are free men'。'freedom' 是名词,形容词形式是 'free'。
× Just I want I can immediately look my lips.
✓ Whenever I want, I can immediately look at my list.
'Just I want I can' 语序错误,应为 'Whenever I want'。'look my lips' 错误,应该是 'look at my list'。'lips' 是嘴唇,与语境不符。