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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Yes, I make a list when I go shop. This habit was started since I was a teenager. I found it very helpful to save money and to keep my life organized.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Does it work? Oh yes, I make a list for my work every day. It's very beneficial since every work day we need to make it as organized as we can. Every in every morning I prioritize.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

I think they may just don't get used to it, they prefer a more casual way to live their lives. But I do think to make the work list is a good habit.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I prefer to make a list on my phone Cos because it's very convenient for me to add or to have something down to. I mean to mark something I have done to keep it updated in time.

Đánh giá

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Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点,但语法和用词不够自然,且句子结构较简单。建议注意动词时态和介词的正确使用,避免重复表达,并尝试使用连接词使回答更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I started this habit as a teenager. It helps me save money and stay organized when I shop.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题,如“Every in every morning”不自然。建议简化句子结构,使用正确的时态和表达方式,并用连接词增强逻辑性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work every day. It helps me stay organized because I prioritize my tasks each morning.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,句子连接不够自然。建议注意主谓一致,避免重复,使用更准确的表达,并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I think some people don't like making lists because they are not used to it and prefer a more casual lifestyle. However, I believe making a work list is a good habit.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有口语化和不完整的表达,如“Cos because”和“to have something down to”。建议使用完整、正式的句子,避免口语缩写,并清晰表达观点。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very convenient to add items and mark tasks as completed, which helps me keep the list updated in real time.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× Yes, I make a list when I go shop.

Yes, I make a list when I go shopping.

动词go后面接动名词形式表示进行某种活动,go后面不能直接接动词原形shop,应改为shopping。

Past tense issue

× This habit was started since I was a teenager.

This habit started when I was a teenager.

使用过去时started更合适,且since后面应接具体时间点,句中用when更自然。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Every in every morning I prioritize.

Every morning I prioritize.

短语中重复使用every是不正确的,应去掉多余的in。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I think they may just don't get used to it, they prefer a more casual way to live their lives.

I think they may just not be used to it; they prefer a more casual way to live their lives.

may后面不能直接接否定形式don't,应改为may not be。

Incorrect use of conjunction

× But I do think to make the work list is a good habit.

But I do think making a work list is a good habit.

think后面接动名词making更自然,且work list前应加冠词a。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I prefer to make a list on my phone Cos because it's very convenient for me to add or to have something down to.

I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient for me to add or write something down.

Cos是口语缩写,应改为because;短语have something down to不正确,应改为write something down。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I mean to mark something I have done to keep it updated in time.

I mean to mark something I have done to keep it updated in time.

此句语法正确,无需修改。

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