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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Yes I like make this one, I go shopping, it can save much time and if I make the list I do not buy the extra things, it can help.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Certainly I do like make a list for my work. It also can help me improve my efficiency. It's so nice for me and I think when I do the list I can first do.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

Actually, I can't understand why they don't like making this, but maybe I think, I guess they don't want to. Something exceeds them, yeah.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

Actually I prefer to make a list on paper, but nowadays the phone is more quickly and concentrate to bring them to everywhere. So now now I more make phone use.

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Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点,但语法和表达不够自然,句子结构较为混乱。建议使用完整句子,注意时态和主谓一致,同时避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like to make a shopping list because it saves me a lot of time. Also, it helps me avoid buying unnecessary items, which is very helpful.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的句子结构,明确说明做清单的好处,并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Certainly, I like to make lists for my work because they help me improve my efficiency. When I have a list, I can prioritize my tasks and complete them more effectively.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够具体,表达含糊且语法错误较多。建议给出具体原因,并用连词连接观点,使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: Actually, I don't understand why some people dislike making lists, but I guess they might find it time-consuming or feel that it limits their flexibility.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够准确,句子结构混乱。建议使用更自然的表达,清楚说明偏好并解释原因。

Ví dụ: Actually, I prefer to make lists on paper because it's more straightforward. However, nowadays I use my phone more often since it's convenient and I can carry it everywhere.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× Yes I like make this one, I go shopping, it can save much time and if I make the list I do not buy the extra things, it can help.

Yes, I like making this one. When I go shopping, it can save much time, and if I make the list, I do not buy extra things. It can help.

动词like后面应接动名词making,而不是动词原形make。

Verb + -ing form

× Certainly I do like make a list for my work.

Certainly, I do like making a list for my work.

动词like后面应接动名词making,而不是动词原形make。

Verb + -ing form

× It's so nice for me and I think when I do the list I can first do.

It's so nice for me, and I think when I make the list, I can do things first.

动词do the list不合适,应改为make the list。动词make后面不接the list的doing形式,且句子结构需调整。

Verb + -ing form

× Actually, I can't understand why they don't like making this, but maybe I think, I guess they don't want to.

Actually, I can't understand why they don't like making this, but maybe I think they just don't want to.

句子中“maybe I think”多余且不通顺,应删去。

Verb + -ing form

× Actually I prefer to make a list on paper, but nowadays the phone is more quickly and concentrate to bring them to everywhere.

Actually, I prefer to make a list on paper, but nowadays the phone is quicker and more convenient to bring everywhere.

quickly是副词,应改为形容词quicker。concentrate用法错误,应改为more convenient或其他合适表达。

Singular and plural issue

× if I make the list I do not buy the extra things

if I make the list I do not buy extra things

extra things前不需要定冠词the,因为这里指的是泛指的额外物品。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× So now now I more make phone use.

So now I use my phone more.

句子结构混乱,正确表达应为“I use my phone more.”,去掉多余词汇,调整语序。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

ExtraAdditional; Exceptionally; In addition; Addition; Walk-on
NiceEnjoyable; Pleasant; Polite; Subtle; Fine
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