List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“when I going”应为“when I go”，且表达不够连贯，缺少连接词。建议注意时态和主谓一致，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: I only make a list when I go to the supermarket because there are many ingredients I need to buy. If I miss any of them, I cannot cook properly, which makes me feel frustrated.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子较长且缺少适当的连接词。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词如“so”或“because”来增强逻辑性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list on my calendar because it reminds me of the tasks I need to complete. This helps me prioritize my work and finish the most important tasks first.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不清晰，存在语法错误和重复，逻辑混乱。建议理清思路，使用完整句子表达观点，并用连接词使内容连贯。

Ví dụ: I think some people don't like making lists because they are not good at organizing their work. They tend to do tasks as they come without prioritizing, which can make their work less efficient.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构混乱，缺少连接词。建议注意句子完整性，使用连接词如“because”连接原因，并简化表达。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make a list on my Google Calendar because it clearly shows the dates and deadlines. Since I use my computer every day, it's easier for me to manage my tasks this way.

× I only make a list when I going to supermarket because there are so many ingredients I have to buy and I cannot miss any one of it.

✓ I only make a list when I am going to the supermarket because there are so many ingredients I have to buy and I cannot miss any one of them.

这里缺少助动词“am”，动词“going”需要与主语“I”连用时用现在进行时态，正确形式是“am going”。另外，“supermarket”前需要加定冠词“the”，因为特指某个超市。最后，“any one of it”中的“it”应改为复数形式“them”，因为指的是多种成分。

× I only make a list when I going to supermarket because there are so many ingredients I have to buy and I cannot miss any one of it.

✓ I only make a list when I am going to the supermarket because there are so many ingredients I have to buy and I cannot miss any one of them.

“any one of it”中的“it”指代复数“ingredients”，应使用复数代词“them”。

× If I miss anyone of it when I go home, I cannot cook without the ingredients so it will make me feel.

✓ If I miss any one of them when I go home, I cannot cook without the ingredients so it will make me feel bad.

“anyone”应分开为“any one”，且“it”应改为复数代词“them”，因为指代多种成分。句尾“make me feel”缺少形容词，需补充“bad”使句意完整。

× Yes, I usually make a list on my calendar because it will remind me what should I do and what I haven't done yet.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list in my calendar because it will remind me what I should do and what I haven't done yet.

“make a list on my calendar”中应使用介词“in”，表示在日历中做列表。

× Yes, I usually make a list on my calendar because it will remind me what should I do and what I haven't done yet.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list in my calendar because it will remind me what I should do and what I haven't done yet.

宾语从句中陈述句语序应为“what I should do”，而非疑问句语序“what should I do”。

× So it's very helpful to me to let me know what should I do clearly so I can know which one is most important and I have to do it first and this is my part.

✓ So it's very helpful to me to let me know clearly what I should do so I can know which one is most important and I have to do it first, and this is my part.

同样宾语从句中语序应为“what I should do”，且句子较长，适当加逗号分隔使结构更清晰。

× They usually just OK, if you give me a job, I just do it.

✓ They usually just say OK, if you give me a job, I just do it.

“just OK”缺少动词，应补充“say”使句子完整。

× But if people keep doing, sending their jobs, they just keep doing, but they don't know which one is most important and they they gonna make the way.

✓ But if people keep doing and sending their jobs, they just keep doing, but they don't know which one is most important and they are going to make mistakes.

句中“they they gonna make the way”语法错误，应改为“they are going to make mistakes”，表达更准确。

× I prefer make a list on my calendar of Google Chrome, because it is very important to see very clearly the date that what should I do and also the deadline and because I have to use computer every day, so if I make a list on the computer it's much easier for me I don't have.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my Google Chrome calendar because it is very important to see clearly the date of what I should do and also the deadline. Because I have to use the computer every day, making a list on the computer is much easier for me.

“prefer make”应为“prefer to make”；“calendar of Google Chrome”应为“Google Chrome calendar”；“see very clearly the date that what should I do”语序错误，应为“see clearly the date of what I should do”；“use computer”前应加定冠词“the computer”；句子过长且结构混乱，需拆分并调整语序。