List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和表达不够自然，句子结构较为混乱。建议使用完整句子，避免重复表达，并且用更自然的连接词来组织句子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me save time and prevents me from buying unnecessary items.

Gợi ý: 回答中有过多的犹豫词（umm），影响流畅度。建议减少填充词，使用清晰的句子结构，并用连接词使内容连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always take time to make a work list. It helps me know the next steps and reminds me of upcoming tasks.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较好，但语法错误和表达不够准确。建议注意主谓一致，使用更准确的词汇，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: There are many reasons, but mainly because some people believe the world is unpredictable, so they prefer to go with the flow instead of making lists.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清晰。建议完整表达观点，避免断句，使用连贯的句子，并具体说明手机应用的优点。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone using the Notes app because I can write anytime and anywhere, and it also sends me reminders.

× Definitely, it's a making list, can help you to know, can help you to save a lot of time and also can avoid you to spend too much money on some useless things.

✓ Definitely, it's a making list, which can help you to know, can help you to save a lot of time and also can help you avoid spending too much money on some useless things.

The phrase 'making list' should be 'making a list' or 'a list for making'. Also, 'can avoid you to spend' is incorrect; it should be 'can help you avoid spending'. The verb 'avoid' is followed by a gerund (-ing form). This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Definitely, it's a making list, can help you to know, can help you to save a lot of time and also can avoid you to spend too much money on some useless things.

✓ Definitely, it's a making list, which can help you to know, can help you to save a lot of time and also can help you avoid spending too much money on some useless things.

The phrase 'can avoid you to spend' incorrectly uses the pronoun 'you' as the object of 'avoid'. The correct structure is 'help you avoid spending', where 'avoid' is followed by a gerund. This correction fixes the pronoun usage and verb form.

× It is umm. It's really helpful for me because umm it can help you to understand what is the next step you do and alerting you what is coming.

✓ It is umm. It's really helpful for me because umm it can help you understand what the next step is and alert you to what is coming.

The phrase 'alerting you what is coming' is incorrect; it should be 'alert you to what is coming'. Also, 'help you to understand' is better as 'help you understand'. The modal verb 'can' is correctly used, but the verb forms following it need correction.

× While there are heaps of reasons, first of all I think because they believes there are so many changes and challenges in the world and we cannot forecast, so they would like to follow the flow of the things.

✓ While there are heaps of reasons, first of all I think because they believe there are so many changes and challenges in the world and we cannot forecast, so they would like to follow the flow of things.

The subject 'they' is plural, so the verb should be 'believe' not 'believes'. Also, 'the flow of the things' is better as 'the flow of things' without the definite article 'the'. This correction fixes subject-verb agreement and article usage.

× While there are heaps of reasons, first of all I think because they believes there are so many changes and challenges in the world and we cannot forecast, so they would like to follow the flow of the things.

✓ While there are heaps of reasons, first of all I think because they believe there are so many changes and challenges in the world and we cannot forecast, so they would like to follow the flow of things.

The phrase 'the flow of the things' incorrectly uses the definite article 'the' before 'things'. In this context, 'things' is general and does not require 'the'. Removing 'the' makes the phrase more natural and grammatically correct.

× Well, now I prefer to make list on my phone.

✓ Well, now I prefer to make a list on my phone.

The phrase 'make list on my phone' is missing the article 'a' before 'list'. Also, 'make a list on my phone' is the correct expression. This correction addresses article usage and preposition placement.

× Well, now I prefer to make list on my phone.

✓ Well, now I prefer to make a list on my phone.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a'. Omitting the article is incorrect. Adding 'a' corrects the sentence.

× I always use an app called the Note.

✓ I always use an app called Note.

The app name 'Note' does not require the definite article 'the' before it. Using 'the Note' is incorrect unless 'Note' is a common noun, which it is not here. Removing 'the' is appropriate.

× It can send me some. I can write everything I want to write without location and time.

✓ It can send me notifications. I can write everything I want to write without being limited by location or time.

The sentence 'It can send me some.' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'notifications' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'without location and time' is awkward; 'without being limited by location or time' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Also it can Alert me what I.

✓ Also, it can alert me about what I need to do.

The phrase 'alert me what I' is incomplete and lacks a preposition. The correct structure is 'alert me about' or 'alert me to' something. Completing the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.