Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I often make a shopping list when I go out with my parents. This helps me choose exactly what I need and also allows me to manage my expenses better. For instance, by sticking to the list, I can avoid buying unnecessary items and stay within my budget.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Does it work? I often make a list for my work because it helps me to stay organized or focused. For instance, I usually write down my text on my forms so I always know that what I need to do to next. This methods improve my productivity and save time since I don't have to waste energy remembering everything.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time and they find it's hard to manage them a time well. Also, some people prefer to remember everything in their mind instead of writing things down. For example, they believe that making less is unnecessary and slow down them.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Uh, for in my opinion, I prefer to make the list on my phone because the the paper is easily to get lost and my forms I can always check when I, when I, when I whatever I want and it's save more times and improve my work efficiency.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答较自然且内容具体,但可以使用更多连接词使表达更连贯,同时避免重复表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a shopping list when I go out with my parents because it helps me choose exactly what I need. Moreover, by sticking to the list, I can avoid buying unnecessary items and manage my expenses better.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清,建议注意句子结构和时态一致性,使用更准确的词汇。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused. For example, I write down tasks on my forms so I always know what to do next. This method improves my productivity and saves time since I don't have to waste energy trying to remember everything.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 表达中有语法和用词错误,建议加强语法准确性和词汇的恰当使用,同时使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time and is hard to manage. Also, they prefer to remember everything in their mind instead of writing things down. For example, they believe that making lists is unnecessary and slows them down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答不够流畅且有重复和语法错误,建议简化表达,避免重复,并注意语法和词汇的准确性。
Ví dụ: In my opinion, I prefer to make lists on my phone because paper can easily get lost. Also, I can check my lists anytime, which saves time and improves my work efficiency.
× This methods improve my productivity and save time since I don't have to waste energy remembering everything.
✓ These methods improve my productivity and save time since I don't have to waste energy remembering everything.
此处'methods'是复数形式,前面的指示代词应使用复数'these',而不是单数'this'。
× I usually write down my text on my forms so I always know that what I need to do to next.
✓ I usually write down my tasks on my forms so I always know what I need to do next.
'write down my text on my forms'表达不准确,应为'write down my tasks on my forms',且'that what'多余,改为'what'即可。
× Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time and they find it's hard to manage them a time well.
✓ Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time and they find it's hard to manage their time well.
'manage them a time'表达错误,应为'manage their time','time'是不可数名词,不能用复数形式。
× For example, they believe that making less is unnecessary and slow down them.
✓ For example, they believe that making lists is unnecessary and slows them down.
'making less'应为'making lists','slow down them'中代词顺序错误,应为'slows them down'。
× Uh, for in my opinion, I prefer to make the list on my phone because the the paper is easily to get lost and my forms I can always check when I, when I, when I whatever I want and it's save more times and improve my work efficiency.
✓ Uh, in my opinion, I prefer to make the list on my phone because paper is easy to get lost and I can always check my forms whenever I want, which saves more time and improves my work efficiency.
'for in my opinion'应为'in my opinion';'the the paper'重复;'is easily to get lost'应为'is easy to get lost';'my forms I can always check when I, when I, when I whatever I want'表达混乱,改为'I can always check my forms whenever I want';'it's save more times'应为'which saves more time';'improve'应为'improves'以保持主谓一致。