List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了主要观点，但语法错误较多，且句子较长，缺少适当的连接词。建议注意动词时态和单复数形式，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like to make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember exactly what I need to buy. Moreover, it prevents me from purchasing unnecessary items, which saves both money and time.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复词汇和语法错误，句子不完整。建议注意动词形式一致，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like to make a list during work because it helps me organize and prioritize my tasks efficiently. Additionally, it prevents me from forgetting important meetings.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构不够自然，且有语法错误。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意名词单复数和动词形式。

Ví dụ: I think people have different preferences. Some may feel that making lists wastes time, so they avoid it, but they can still manage their lives and work effectively.

Gợi ý: 回答内容完整，但句子较长且有重复词汇。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because digital tools are more convenient than traditional ones. Since I carry my phone everywhere, I can add items anytime and anywhere.

× Yes, I like to make a list when I shopping because it helps me to remember what things I exactly need to buy and avoid buying things unnecessary and help me save both money and time.

✓ Yes, I like to make a list when I am shopping because it helps me to remember exactly what things I need to buy, avoid buying unnecessary things, and help me save both money and time.

动词后面接动名词时，表示正在进行的动作，应该用现在进行时态结构“am/is/are + verb-ing”，这里“when I shopping”缺少助动词，应改为“when I am shopping”。另外，句子中“avoid buying things unnecessary”应调整为“avoid buying unnecessary things”，使形容词修饰名词。

× For your work, yes, I like to make a list during my work time and it helps helps me a lot. Making a list help me organize and prioritize my tasks efficiency and help me to avoid forgetting important meetings It's really.

✓ For work, yes, I like to make a list during my work time and it helps me a lot. Making a list helps me organize and prioritize my tasks efficiently and helps me to avoid forgetting important meetings. It's really helpful.

“Making a list help me”中，主语是单数，谓语动词应加-s，改为“helps”。“tasks efficiency”应改为副词形式“tasks efficiently”，修饰动词“organize and prioritize”。“help me to avoid”前应加“helps”，保持主谓一致。句末不完整，应补充完整表达。

× I think it's very normal for different people have different preferences. Some people may think that making lists is a waste of time, so they don't like to make a list, but they can also manage their lives and works.

✓ I think it's very normal that different people have different preferences. Some people may think that making lists is a waste of time, so they don't like to make a list, but they can also manage their lives and work.

“for different people have different preferences”结构不正确，应改为“that different people have different preferences”。“works”作为复数形式不常用，改为“work”更合适。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always believe that digital tools are more convenient than the conventional tools and I carry my phone every day with me so I can add items at any time, no matter where and when where I am.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always believe that digital tools are more convenient than conventional tools, and I carry my phone with me every day, so I can add items at any time, no matter where or when I am.

“the conventional tools”中的定冠词“the”不必要，应去掉。短语“carry my phone every day with me”中“with me”位置不当，改为“carry my phone with me every day”更自然。连接词“no matter where and when where I am”重复，应改为“no matter where or when I am”。