List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法错误较多，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复表达，并使用更地道的表达方式。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me clearly know what I need to buy, ensuring I don't forget anything.

Gợi ý: 回答中时态使用不当，句子结构混乱，表达不够清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，注意时态一致，并且避免冗余。

Ví dụ: I usually take notes while working because it helps me keep track of what I've done, and it works well for me.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较丰富，但表达不够连贯，部分句子结构不自然。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并简化句子结构。

Ví dụ: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer the freedom to do things spontaneously, like my brother, who doesn't like to plan ahead.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且句子不完整。建议加强语法基础，使用完整句子，并明确表达观点。

Ví dụ: With the development of technology, I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient than carrying paper everywhere.

× Yes, I always make the list when I was shopping because it makes me have a clear known to what I need to buy and what I'm going to buy, so it makes sure that I'm not going to miss something.

✓ Yes, I always make the list when I am shopping because it helps me clearly know what I need to buy and what I'm going to buy, so it ensures that I don't miss anything.

句子中使用了过去时态"was shopping"，但描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时"am shopping"。此外，"makes me have a clear known"表达不正确，应改为"helps me clearly know"，使表达更自然。

× I always have some note when I was working because it can make me have a clear understanding and so that I'm not forgetting the things I have already done it and it always works.

✓ I always have some notes when I am working because it helps me have a clear understanding and so that I don't forget the things I have already done, and it always works.

句子中"when I was working"使用了过去时，但描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时"when I am working"。"some note"应为复数形式"some notes"。"I'm not forgetting"应改为一般现在时否定形式"I don't forget"，以符合习惯表达。

× I think it's interesting because as to seeing that everyone is different and my brother is a good example of this.

✓ I think it's interesting because everyone is different, and my brother is a good example of this.

短语"as to seeing"用法不正确，应直接表达"because everyone is different"，使句子更通顺。

× He doesn't like to make any list or to do lists because he feels just very free to do whatever he's thinking.

✓ He doesn't like to make any lists or to-do lists because he feels very free to do whatever he's thinking.

"any list"应为复数形式"any lists"，"to do lists"应为"to-do lists"，表示待办事项列表。

× By the develop of the technology, it's more useful to mark what you're going to do on a, because you're not supposed to bring in a paper everywhere you go.

✓ With the development of technology, it's more useful to mark what you're going to do on a device, because you're not supposed to bring paper everywhere you go.

"By the develop of the technology"应改为"With the development of technology"，表达更准确。"bring in a paper"中"in"多余，应去掉。

× But I think is most necessary element that we are using.

✓ But I think it is the most necessary element that we are using.

句子缺少主语"it"，应补充完整。并且"most necessary element"前应加定冠词"the"。