List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语句不够连贯，有语法错误，且表达不够具体。建议练习使用完整且连贯的句子，避免重复和语法错误，同时提供更具体的例子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a simple shopping list before I go to the store. For instance, at the beginning of a new school term, I write down all the supplies I need to buy to prepare myself.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且细节不够具体。建议加强语法练习，使用更准确的时态和表达，并具体说明如何使用清单帮助工作。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often make lists for my work, and they help me stay organized. Since I am a reporter at Shenzhen Television, I have many tasks each day, so writing them down ensures I don't forget anything important.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达混乱，缺乏连贯性和具体内容。建议练习构建完整句子，清晰表达观点，并提供具体原因。

Ví dụ: Some people might dislike making lists because they find it inconvenient to prepare paper and pen. Also, they may feel that writing lists takes too much time or effort.

Gợi ý: 回答较为清晰，但表达略显简单且有语法错误。建议使用更丰富的词汇和更准确的语法结构，增强表达的自然性和流畅性。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient. Unlike paper lists, which require pen and paper, my phone is always with me, so I can quickly add or check items anytime.

× For example when I started to when I want to start a new term, I will write some things that I need to buy.

✓ For example, when I want to start a new term, I will write some things that I need to buy.

句子中出现了“started to when I want”，时态混乱且结构不完整，应去掉“started to”使句子时态一致且通顺。

× Yes, I often make a list for my work and it really working.

✓ Yes, I often make a list for my work and it really works.

“it really working”缺少动词形式，应使用第三人称单数动词“works”来与主语“it”保持时态和数的一致。

× I need to write them in the form or in the past.

✓ I need to write them in the form or in the past tense.

“in the past”在此处表达不完整，应该补充“tense”使表达完整且符合语法。

× I think maybe they want to make a list, but they when they first think of making this, they may want to have a paper and have a pen is so complicated.

✓ I think maybe they want to make a list, but when they first think of making it, they feel having paper and a pen is so complicated.

句子结构混乱，“but they when they first think”不符合语法，应调整为“but when they first think”，并且“have a paper and have a pen is so complicated”应改为“having paper and a pen is so complicated”使句子通顺。

× Make a list on paper means you need to prepare paper and pen.

✓ Making a list on paper means you need to prepare paper and a pen.

“Make a list on paper”作为主语时应使用动名词形式“Making”，且“prepare paper and pen”中“pen”前应加不定冠词“a”。

× If you don't have that you maybe not make a list.

✓ If you don't have that, you may not make a list.

“you maybe not make a list”中“maybe”应为情态动词“may”，且句子缺少逗号，需改为“you may not make a list”。

× But on my phone I can make that just on the menu.

✓ But on my phone, I can make it just in the menu.

“make that just on the menu”中“on the menu”应改为“in the menu”，因为菜单是一个容器，使用介词“in”更合适。