List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use more natural phrasing and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I usually bring a shopping list when I go to the grocery store because it helps me stay organized and focus on buying only the essential items, so I don't end up wandering around and purchasing things I don't need.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but is incomplete and has some awkward phrasing. Make sure to finish your sentences and use linking words to explain your points clearly. Also, avoid using numbers like '1st' in spoken answers; say 'first' instead.

Ví dụ: I think making a list at work is very important because it allows me to prioritize urgent tasks first and handle less urgent ones later. This method always helps me stay organized and complete my work efficiently.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but watch for subject-verb agreement errors and try to use more varied vocabulary. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas better.

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it limits their freedom. They prefer to do things spontaneously, at their own time and pace, without being restricted by a fixed plan.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and well-structured, but you can improve it by using more concise language and linking words to make it flow better. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas.

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because I can easily access them anytime, and unlike paper lists, they won't get lost or damaged.

× Having it helps me to stay organized and helps me to buy the essential items and doesn't wander around the store and buy unnecessary items.

✓ Having it helps me to stay organized and helps me to buy the essential items and prevents me from wandering around the store and buying unnecessary items.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'doesn't wander' which does not agree with the subject 'Having it'. The subject is singular, so the verb should be 'prevents me from wandering' to maintain subject-verb agreement and correct verb form usage.

× That way I can prioritize the critical ones to do 1st and the non urgent to do later.

✓ That way, I can prioritize the critical tasks to do first and the non-urgent ones to do later.

The original sentence lacks clarity and proper structure. Adding commas and specifying 'tasks' clarifies the meaning. Also, '1st' should be spelled out as 'first' and 'non urgent' should be hyphenated as 'non-urgent' to correctly modify 'ones'.

× Some of them wants to do things spontaneously, at their own time, at their own pace and freedom.

✓ Some of them want to do things spontaneously, at their own time, at their own pace, and with freedom.

The subject 'Some of them' is plural, so the verb should be 'want' instead of 'wants'. Also, 'and freedom' is better expressed as 'and with freedom' to maintain parallel structure and clarity.