Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
That's why I usually making a list. When I go to the shopping list, I remind to remind me I.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Work, yes, I usually I'm making a list of and I'm I'm doing your work, especially from home, so it is very easy to me or organize and reminding me that.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I'll tell you about the other don't like to make English because they have a mom. I believe on they are reminding everything. Some people already minding it.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I'm gonna put to the paper especially when I'm working from the home, while I'm at the home. So it is very easy and convenience convenient for me. But sometime I am outside from the home. So when I'm making a visit on the home.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, such as 'Yes, I usually make a list when I shop to help me remember what to buy.' Then add a supporting detail using linking words, for example, 'because it helps me avoid forgetting items and saves time.'
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time at the store.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and lacks clear structure. Start with a direct response like 'Yes, I make lists for my work, especially when I work from home.' Then explain why, using linking words such as 'because' or 'so that.' For example, 'because it helps me stay organized and remember my tasks.'
Ví dụ: Yes, I make lists for my work, especially when I work from home, because it helps me stay organized and remember all my tasks.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Try to start with a clear topic sentence like 'Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to remember things mentally.' Then add a reason or example using linking words such as 'for example' or 'because.'
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to remember things mentally and feel confident they won't forget important tasks.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Begin with a clear topic sentence like 'I prefer to make lists on paper when I am at home because it is convenient.' Then add a contrasting detail using linking words such as 'however' or 'but' to explain your preference when outside.
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on paper when I am at home because it is convenient; however, when I am outside, I use my phone to keep track of my tasks.
× That's why I usually making a list.
✓ That's why I usually make a list.
The verb 'make' should be in its base form after 'usually' to indicate habitual action. Using 'making' here is incorrect because 'usually' is followed by the base verb, not the '-ing' form.
× When I go to the shopping list, I remind to remind me I.
✓ When I go shopping, I remind myself.
The phrase 'go to the shopping list' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping'. Also, 'I remind to remind me I' is ungrammatical; the correct reflexive pronoun 'myself' should be used with 'remind'.
× Work, yes, I usually I'm making a list of and I'm I'm doing your work, especially from home, so it is very easy to me or organize and reminding me that.
✓ Work, yes, I usually make a list and do my work, especially from home, so it is very easy for me to organize and remind myself of that.
The phrase 'I'm making a list' is incorrect here; 'usually' requires the base verb 'make'. Also, 'I'm doing your work' should be 'do my work' to match the subject. 'Easy to me' should be 'easy for me'. 'Reminding me that' should be 'remind myself of that'.
× I'll tell you about the other don't like to make English because they have a mom.
✓ I'll tell you about others who don't like to make lists because they have a memory.
'The other' should be 'others' to refer to people in general. 'Make English' is incorrect; likely intended 'make lists'. 'They have a mom' is incorrect; probably meant 'they have a memory' or 'they rely on memory'.
× I believe on they are reminding everything.
✓ I believe they remember everything.
The phrase 'believe on' is incorrect; 'believe' does not require a preposition here. 'They are reminding everything' is incorrect; 'remind' is transitive and requires an object; 'remember' is the correct verb here.
× Some people already minding it.
✓ Some people already remember it.
'Minding' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'remember'. 'Already' is correctly placed before the verb.
× I'm gonna put to the paper especially when I'm working from the home, while I'm at the home.
✓ I usually write on paper, especially when I'm working from home.
'Gonna' is informal and should be replaced with 'usually write' to express habitual action. 'Put to the paper' is incorrect; 'write on paper' is correct. 'From the home' and 'at the home' should be 'from home' and 'at home'.
× So it is very easy and convenience convenient for me.
✓ So it is very easy and convenient for me.
'Convenience' is a noun; the adjective 'convenient' should be used here. Using both 'convenience' and 'convenient' together is redundant.
× But sometime I am outside from the home.
✓ But sometimes I am outside the home.
'Sometime' should be plural 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Outside from the home' is incorrect; 'outside the home' is correct.
× So when I'm making a visit on the home.
✓ So when I visit home.
'Making a visit on the home' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'visit home'. The sentence is incomplete and should be connected properly.