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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Yes I do. I often make a list when I shop because it can help me to remember what I need to buy instead of buying a lot of other things I don't need at all.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Yes I do. I often make a list for my job. When I look at my schedule, I could easily and clearly figure out what I should do 1st and which one is more important and so I can spend a very effective day when I work.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

Well, in my view, some people just don't like making lists because they think it's unnecessary and it will cost them a lot of time to write down the schedule. So. But personally I like making these because I feel more comfortable.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

Personally, I prefer to make a list on my comparing to paper or notebook. My form is more portable. Besides, I could also make an alarm on my phone to remind me of my schedule, which is very useful for me.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.5Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达清晰且内容相关,但句子结构稍显简单,且有些表达可以更自然流畅。建议使用更多连接词使句子更连贯,同时避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember exactly what I need, so I avoid buying unnecessary items.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容完整,但语法和表达上有些小错误,且句子较长,建议简化句子结构并使用连接词使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a to-do list for work. By checking my schedule, I can prioritize tasks and have a more productive day.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题,建议避免使用口语化的停顿词,句子应更流畅且逻辑清晰。

Ví dụ: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and unnecessary. However, I prefer making lists as it helps me feel more organized.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,建议注意句子结构,避免词语使用错误,并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone rather than on paper because it's more portable. Also, I can set alarms to remind me of important tasks, which is very helpful.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect conjunction use

× So. But personally I like making these because I feel more comfortable.

But personally, I like making these because I feel more comfortable.

句子中使用了两个连词“So”和“But”,这是不正确的。应去掉“So”,只保留一个连词以保持句子连贯。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Personally, I prefer to make a list on my comparing to paper or notebook.

Personally, I prefer to make a list on my phone compared to paper or notebook.

句子中“on my comparing to paper”结构不正确,应使用“on my phone compared to paper”来表达比较关系。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× My form is more portable.

My phone is more portable.

“form”应为“phone”,这是一个拼写错误,导致代词指代不明。

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× I could also make an alarm on my phone to remind me of my schedule, which is very useful for me.

I can also set an alarm on my phone to remind me of my schedule, which is very useful for me.

“make an alarm”用法不当,正确表达应为“set an alarm”,表示设置闹钟。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

ComfortablePleasant; Cozy; Loose; Leisurely
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
UsefulFunctional; Beneficial
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