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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Yes, I really make a clear list before I go shopping because it helps me save time and avoid forgetting important items.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Oh yes, I always make a list for my work and it works.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

I think everyone's characteristic is different. For example, I'm AJ person and some people person and they don't like unless they enjoy the enjoy the changing things.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

Oh, I prefer to map list on my phone because I use my phone every day which makes it very convenient and for example I can quickly add or delete items whenever I think of something.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达清晰且内容相关,但可以更自然地使用连接词,使句子更流畅。例如,可以用“because”连接原因,同时避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a clear list before shopping because it helps me save time and ensures I don't forget important items.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答较简短,缺乏具体细节和连接词。建议增加具体例子或说明为什么列表有效,以丰富内容。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me organize tasks efficiently and ensures nothing is overlooked.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰,表达混乱且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构,明确表达观点,并使用恰当的词汇。

Ví dụ: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer flexibility and enjoy changing plans rather than following a fixed schedule.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误(如“map list”应为“make a list”),且句子较长,建议简化并注意用词准确。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily add or delete items whenever I remember something.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× I think everyone's characteristic is different.

I think everyone's characteristics are different.

这里的 'characteristic' 应该用复数形式 'characteristics',因为指的是每个人的多个特征。主语是复数,谓语动词也要用复数形式 'are'。

Sentence structure errors

× For example, I'm AJ person and some people person and they don't like unless they enjoy the enjoy the changing things.

For example, I'm an AJ person and some people are different; they don't like it unless they enjoy changing things.

原句结构混乱,缺少冠词 'an',动词缺失,重复使用 'enjoy',句子不完整。需要添加冠词,补充动词,去除重复词,并调整句子结构使其通顺。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Oh, I prefer to map list on my phone because I use my phone every day which makes it very convenient and for example I can quickly add or delete items whenever I think of something.

Oh, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I use my phone every day, which makes it very convenient. For example, I can quickly add or delete items whenever I think of something.

原句中 'map list' 应为 'make a list',且句子过长,缺少逗号分隔,导致表达不清晰。需要更正动词,分割句子,使表达更准确。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

ClearUnderstandable; Obvious; Transparent; Bright; Unobstructed
DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
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