List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "I make a list when I whenever I go for shopping". Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember the items I need to buy and saves time.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using better linking words and avoiding repetition. For example, instead of repeating 'help me', use synonyms or restructure the sentence for clarity.

Ví dụ: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work as it helps me stay focused and ensures I complete all tasks by the end of the day.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to complete your thoughts and use proper sentence structure. Also, provide specific reasons and use linking words to explain your ideas.

Ví dụ: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it inconvenient to carry them around, and they prefer to remember things mentally.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be enhanced by adding more specific reasons and linking words to make it more coherent and detailed.

Ví dụ: I usually prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient to carry and I can easily edit or add items anytime.

× Yes, I make a list when I whenever I go for shopping because it helps me a lot to remember my things which I have to buy.

✓ Yes, I make a list whenever I go shopping because it helps me a lot to remember the things I have to buy.

The phrase 'when I whenever I go for shopping' is incorrect due to redundant conjunctions 'when' and 'whenever'. Also, 'go for shopping' is not idiomatic; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'. The relative clause 'which I have to buy' is better as 'the things I have to buy' for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me to stay focused and help me to remember the things which I have to do before the day ends.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay focused and helps me remember the things I have to do before the day ends.

The phrase 'helps me to stay focused and help me to remember' has inconsistent verb forms; both verbs should agree in form. Also, 'helps me stay focused and helps me remember' is more natural. The relative clause 'which I have to do' can be simplified to 'I have to do' for better flow.

× I I think that there is the main reason is that they should have to carry the list whenever they go outside and just.

✓ I think the main reason is that they have to carry the list whenever they go outside.

The sentence has redundancy and incomplete structure. 'I I think that there is the main reason is' is incorrect; it should be 'I think the main reason is'. The phrase 'should have to carry' is incorrect; 'have to carry' suffices. The sentence ends abruptly with 'and just', which should be removed for completeness.

× I usually prefer to make a list on phone because it is very easy to carry whenever we go outside.

✓ I usually prefer to make a list on my phone because it is very easy to carry whenever we go outside.

The phrase 'on phone' is missing a possessive determiner; it should be 'on my phone'. This clarifies ownership and is grammatically correct.