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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Yes, what? I need to buy many things at one time. I'll make a list to remind me.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

In of course, I usually make lists of my different courses and different homework tasks at weekends and then I'll do it 1 by 1. I think it is really efficient.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

Well, for people who are well organized or having a good memory, maybe listing a list is useless for them. So it's just a great deal of work.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I usually make list on my phone because I carry my phone everywhere and I can check whenever I want it.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够自然,存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议简洁明了地回答问题,并避免使用不完整或错误的句子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because I need to buy many items at once, and the list helps me remember everything.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方,建议使用更准确的表达,并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Of course, I usually make lists of my courses and homework tasks on weekends, and then I complete them one by one. I find this method very efficient.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 表达较为清晰,但句子结构和用词可以更自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式,并注意句子连贯性。

Ví dụ: Some people who are well organized or have a good memory may find making lists unnecessary because it feels like extra work to them.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然,但有小的语法错误和表达不够完整。建议注意冠词使用,并丰富细节使回答更完整。

Ví dụ: I usually make lists on my phone because I carry it everywhere, so I can check my list anytime, which is very convenient.

Ngữ pháp

Quantifier error

× I need to buy many things at one time.

I need to buy a lot of things at one time.

“many”通常用于可数名词复数,但在口语中“a lot of”更自然,且更符合表达习惯。这里建议用“a lot of”替代“many”。

Incorrect preposition use

× In of course, I usually make lists of my different courses and different homework tasks at weekends and then I'll do it 1 by 1.

Of course, I usually make lists of my different courses and different homework tasks on weekends and then I'll do them one by one.

“In of course”是错误搭配,应为“Of course”。“at weekends”在美式英语中通常用“on weekends”。“do it 1 by 1”应改为“do them one by one”,因为“lists”和“tasks”是复数,代词应为“them”,且数字应写成单词形式。

Verb form error

× Well, for people who are well organized or having a good memory, maybe listing a list is useless for them.

Well, for people who are well organized or have a good memory, maybe making a list is useless for them.

“having a good memory”应改为“have a good memory”,保持与前面“are well organized”并列的谓语动词形式一致。且“listing a list”表达不当,应改为“making a list”。

Singular and plural issue

× I usually make list on my phone because I carry my phone everywhere and I can check whenever I want it.

I usually make lists on my phone because I carry my phone everywhere and I can check whenever I want.

“make list”应为“make lists”,因为“list”是可数名词,需用复数形式。句末“check whenever I want it”中“it”多余,应去掉。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
GreatConsiderable; Large; Prominent; Magnificent; Enthusiastic
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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