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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

I didn't make the list very often. I often shop whenever I want and buy whatever I want.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

I sometimes make a list for the for my work or for the homework, but it doesn't. Make results very often as I didn't follow the list usually.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

I think that making a list may make some people feel that they are limited and they don't want to follow a rule. They are more likely to do things spontaneously.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I prefer make a list on the phone as as the phone is more easily to carry than the paper and I can. Change my list very often without.

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Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中时态使用不准确,且表达不够自然。建议使用一般现在时描述习惯行为,并避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: I don't often make a list when I shop because I usually buy things spontaneously.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 句子结构混乱,语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议简化句子,使用正确时态和连词,明确表达观点。

Ví dụ: I sometimes make a list for my work or homework, but it doesn't always help because I usually don't follow it.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为清晰,但缺少连接词使句子衔接不够流畅。建议使用连接词如"because"或"so"来增强逻辑性。

Ví dụ: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel restricted and prefer to do things spontaneously.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 语法错误较多,表达不完整,句子不连贯。建议注意动词形式和句子完整性,使用连词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is easier to carry and I can change my list whenever I want.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× I didn't make the list very often.

I don't make a list very often.

这里的时间状语是一般现在时,表示经常性的行为,所以应该用一般现在时态,而不是过去时。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I sometimes make a list for the for my work or for the homework, but it doesn't.

I sometimes make a list for my work or for my homework, but it doesn't.

这里多了一个多余的介词“the”,应去掉以符合正确的介词用法。

Past tense issue

× Make results very often as I didn't follow the list usually.

It doesn't work very often as I don't usually follow the list.

句子时态应与上下文保持一致,描述习惯性行为应使用一般现在时,而不是过去时。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I prefer make a list on the phone as as the phone is more easily to carry than the paper and I can.

I prefer to make a list on the phone as the phone is easier to carry than paper and I can

动词prefer后应接不定式to make;形容词easy的比较级是easier,且后面接动词时用不定式;去掉多余的重复词“as”。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Change my list very often without.

change my list very often without any problem.

句子不完整,缺少宾语或补充说明,需补充完整表达。

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