Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes I do because the list can help me remember what's the things I want to buy and it is a good way to shows to others what I want to bring.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
No, I don't because I think it is useless. It doesn't work.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Because they should be not usually remember the things, so they want to make a list to remember what they want to do.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on my because I can use those anywhere to look my list.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“what's the things”应为“what things”,且“shows to others”表达不准确。建议简化句子结构,避免冗余,同时注意语法正确。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember the items I need to buy and also lets others know what I want to get.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简短且缺乏具体理由,表达不够自然。建议给出更详细的解释,并使用连接词使回答更连贯。
Ví dụ: No, I don't usually make lists for my work because I prefer to keep things in my mind, and I find that lists don't help me stay organized effectively.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答语法混乱,逻辑不清,且内容与问题不符。建议先明确回答问题,再用具体理由支持,注意句子结构和逻辑连贯。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory and feel that lists are unnecessary or time-consuming.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误,如“on my”缺少名词,“look my list”应为“look at my list”。建议完整表达观点并注意语法。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I can access them anywhere and it's more convenient than using paper.
× Yes I do because the list can help me remember what's the things I want to buy and it is a good way to shows to others what I want to bring.
✓ Yes, I do because the list can help me remember the things I want to buy and it is a good way to show others what I want to bring.
这里的错误是名词单复数问题。'what's the things'中'what's'是'what is'的缩写,后面接复数名词'things'不匹配,应去掉'is'。另外,'shows'应改为原形动词'show',因为主语是单数名词'way',后面用不带s的动词不正确。建议注意名词单复数和动词形式的搭配。
× No, I don't because I think it is useless. It doesn't work.
✓ No, I don't because I think it is useless. It doesn't work.
这句话语法正确,没有违反模态动词使用规则。
× Because they should be not usually remember the things, so they want to make a list to remember what they want to do.
✓ Because they usually do not need to remember things, so they want to make a list to remember what they want to do.
这里的错误是模态动词和助动词的错误使用。'should be not usually remember'结构不正确,应该用'usually do not need to remember'表达否定的习惯动作。建议学习正确的否定句型和助动词用法。
× I prefer to make a list on my because I can use those anywhere to look my list.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can use it anywhere to look at my list.
这里缺少名词,'on my'后面应加名词'phone'。另外,'use those'应改为'use it',因为指代单数名词。'look my list'应改为'look at my list',动词'look'后面需要介词'at'。建议注意介词搭配和代词指代的一致性。