List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh dùng từ lặp lại và những cụm từ không chính xác như 'I was like' hay 'a friend of a golden fish'. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó giải thích lý do cụ thể và dùng từ vựng phù hợp.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I tend to forget the items I need. Making a list helps me stay organized and ensures I don't miss anything important.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ như 'waste waste'. Câu trả lời cần có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ được liên kết mạch lạc. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, although I am not in the habit of making work lists regularly, I find them very helpful. They remind me of important tasks and deadlines, which helps me avoid wasting time and stay productive.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Hãy tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'making we sleep'. Bạn nên đưa ra lý do cụ thể, dùng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp để giải thích quan điểm của mình.

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to remember tasks mentally. Additionally, writing or typing lists can feel like extra work, which discourages them.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'make you phone as a distractor'. Hãy giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc và dùng từ vựng phù hợp để làm rõ quan điểm của bạn.

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because using my phone can be distracting. Paper lists are easier to check frequently and help me focus on my tasks without interruptions.

× Yeah, I was like, yes.

✓ Yeah, I said yes.

The phrase 'I was like' is informal and incorrect in this context. The correct past tense verb to express a response is 'said'.

× And it become one of my habits like because I am like have a girl, a friend of a golden fish.

✓ And it became one of my habits because I have a girlfriend who owns a goldfish.

The verb 'become' should be in past tense 'became' to match the past context. Also, 'I am like have a girl' is incorrect; it should be 'I have a girlfriend'.

× So I find it quite difficult to remain all to remember all the things that I need to buy.

✓ So I find it quite difficult to remember all the things that I need to buy.

The phrase 'remain all to remember' is incorrect. The correct phrase is simply 'remember all'.

× So making this is really important.

✓ So making this list is really important.

The pronoun 'this' is vague; specifying 'this list' clarifies the meaning.

× Yeah, I will say yes, I'm I'm not currently in the habit of doing that.

✓ Yeah, I would say yes, but I'm not currently in the habit of doing that.

The modal verb 'will' is incorrect here; 'would' is appropriate for expressing a tentative agreement.

× It's quite helpful because it's always remind me to the to the list of the date and not waste waste of time.

✓ It's quite helpful because it always reminds me of the list and helps me not waste time.

The verb 'remind' needs 'reminds me of' not 'remind me to the'. Also, 'waste waste of time' is redundant and incorrect.

× More like it is also a way to keep my keep me being productive instead of wasting time.

✓ Moreover, it is also a way to keep me productive instead of wasting time.

The phrase 'keep my keep me being productive' is incorrect and redundant; 'keep me productive' is correct.

× Personally, I think they're a bit lazy because making we sleep that they have to think of the work they need to do.

✓ Personally, I think they're a bit lazy because making lists means they have to think about the work they need to do.

The phrase 'making we sleep' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'making lists means'.

× Moreover, they have to like maybe write it down or type it in their computer screen.

✓ Moreover, they have to maybe write it down or type it on their computer screen.

The correct preposition with 'type' and 'computer screen' is 'on', not 'in'.

× I would say on paper because sometime making a list in a phone may cause it's like not actually as reductious as we had expected because we make you phone as a distractor so we easily get into it.

✓ I would say on paper because sometimes making a list on a phone is not as productive as we expect since we use our phone as a distraction and easily get distracted.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' for frequency. 'In a phone' should be 'on a phone'. 'Reductious' is incorrect; 'productive' fits the context. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Instead making lists on paper have to keep checking and more where you can see the task whatever you want.

✓ Instead, making lists on paper allows you to keep checking and see the tasks you want.

The original sentence is unclear and has incorrect prepositions and structure. 'Have to keep checking and more where you can see' is corrected to 'allows you to keep checking and see'.