Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
No, I didn't understand when I was when I shopped. Umm, I hadn't, uh, missed the habit.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Lol I don't make a list in my work because I think it's very trouble to lift and it will spare more time to do it and the study time will reduce so I don't have the.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Some people think it's very troublesome because they don't spare much time to do it. And then think it you sneeze for their shopping plan.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on my phone so that it can help me look through the plans. Pearl.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 你的回答不够清晰,表达含糊且语法错误较多。建议直接回答问题,并用简洁的句子说明原因,避免重复和犹豫词。
Ví dụ: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清的问题,且内容不连贯。建议用完整句子表达观点,并说明原因,避免使用口语化的笑声词。
Ví dụ: No, I don't make lists for my work because I find it time-consuming and prefer to focus directly on my tasks.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和不连贯的表达,内容不明确。建议用简单明了的句子说明原因,并避免无意义的词汇。
Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they find it takes too much time and interrupts their plans.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答较为简短且有语法错误,最后的'Pearl'无意义。建议用完整句子说明偏好并给出理由,避免无关词汇。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and easy to check my plans anytime.
× No, I didn't understand when I was when I shopped. Umm, I hadn't, uh, missed the habit.
✓ No, I didn't understand when I shopped. Umm, I hadn't developed the habit.
这里的错误是过去时态使用不当。'I didn't understand when I was when I shopped' 句子结构混乱,应简化为 'I didn't understand when I shopped'。'I hadn't, uh, missed the habit' 语义不清,正确表达应为 'I hadn't developed the habit',表示过去未养成习惯。建议简化句子结构,正确使用过去完成时。
× Lol I don't make a list in my work because I think it's very trouble to lift and it will spare more time to do it and the study time will reduce so I don't have the.
✓ I don't make a list at work because I think it's very troublesome to write, and it will take more time to do it, so my study time will be reduced, so I don't make one.
这里 'very trouble' 应为形容词 'troublesome','to lift' 应为 'to write' 或 'to make',表达更准确。句子结构混乱,缺少主语和谓语,需调整句子顺序,使表达清晰。建议使用正确的形容词和完整句子结构。
× I don't make a list in my work because I think it's very trouble to lift and it will spare more time to do it and the study time will reduce so I don't have the.
✓ I don't make a list at work because I think it's very troublesome to write, and it will take more time to do it, so my study time will be reduced, so I don't make one.
介词 'in my work' 应改为 'at work',表示在工作场所。'spare more time' 语义不清,改为 'take more time' 更合适。建议注意介词搭配的正确使用。
× And then think it you sneeze for their shopping plan.
✓ And then they think it will interfere with their shopping plan.
原句中 'think it you sneeze' 语法错误,代词使用混乱,应改为 'they think it will interfere',使主语和代词一致,表达清晰。建议注意代词和主语的一致性。
× I prefer to make a list on my phone so that it can help me look through the plans. Pearl.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone so that it can help me look through the plans clearly.
句尾 'Pearl' 可能是误写,应为 'clearly',表示清楚地查看计划。建议注意拼写和词语选择。