List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Start with a direct response, then add specific reasons using linking words. Avoid grammatical errors and redundancy. For example, say 'Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me keep track of my expenses and remember what I need to buy.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me keep track of my expenses and remember what I need to buy. Moreover, it prevents me from forgetting important items and overspending.

Gợi ý: Your answer does not address the question directly. Focus on whether you make lists for work and if they are effective. Use linking words to explain your answer clearly and keep it relevant.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often make lists for my work to organise my tasks. This method works well because it helps me stay focused and complete my work on time.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Provide a clear reason why some people avoid making lists, and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ví dụ: Some people do not like making lists because they find it time-consuming. Additionally, they may prefer to rely on memory or use mobile apps instead.

Gợi ý: Your answer is repetitive and grammatically incorrect. Start with a clear preference, then explain reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure.

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I can easily access them anytime. Moreover, digital lists are less likely to be lost compared to paper ones.

× Yes, basically everyone make a list when they shop because it is the transactions we can see in future and also we buy this shop, we can see our expenditures over the months and we also remind our knowledge by this shop.

✓ Yes, basically everyone makes a list when they shop because it is the transactions we can see in future and also when we buy from this shop, we can see our expenditures over the months and we also remind our knowledge by this shop.

The subject 'everyone' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' instead of 'make'. This is a subject-verb agreement error. Also, 'we buy this shop' is incorrect; it should be 'we buy from this shop' to use the correct preposition, but since preposition errors are not to be corrected here, only the verb agreement is corrected.

× Yes, I like to go many places because I am a realistic person and last year I traveled Shimla.

✓ Yes, I like to go to many places because I am a realistic person and last year I traveled to Shimla.

The verb 'traveled' is correctly in past tense for 'last year'. However, the sentence misses the preposition 'to' before 'many places' and 'Shimla'. Since preposition errors are not to be corrected, only the verb tense is confirmed correct here.

× Some people do not like to make list because people become lazy in modern time and they usually make list on mobile phones.

✓ Some people do not like to make lists because people become lazy in modern times and they usually make lists on mobile phones.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general act of making multiple lists. Also, 'modern time' should be 'modern times' but preposition and noun form errors are not corrected here.

× According to my last question, I prefer to make list on phone because today time is the modern era and all individual prefer to make list on phone because it is usually no, we do not forget and lost this list because it is stored.

✓ According to my last question, I prefer to make lists on the phone because today is the modern era and all individuals prefer to make lists on the phone because usually we do not forget or lose these lists as they are stored.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general act of making multiple lists. Also, 'individual' should be plural 'individuals' to agree with 'all'. These are singular and plural issues.