List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is quite short and a bit unclear. Try to give a clear topic sentence and then explain why making a list helps you. Avoid incomplete sentences and aim for more natural phrasing.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time. For example, I can avoid buying unnecessary items and focus on what’s important.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but the explanation is a bit confusing. Try to organise your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, check your grammar for clarity.

Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work in the kitchen. It helps me remember all the preparations I need to do, so I don’t forget anything important. This way, my work runs smoothly without any problems.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and lacks a direct response. Try to give a general reason why some people dislike making lists and support it with an example. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Some people don’t like making lists because they find it tiring or time-consuming. For instance, after a long day at work, they might prefer to relax instead of organising tasks.

Gợi ý: Your answer is brief and could be expanded with reasons. Try to explain why you prefer paper lists and add supporting details to make your answer more natural and complete.

Ví dụ: I prefer to make a list on paper because I enjoy writing things down by hand. It helps me remember better and I find it more satisfying than typing on my phone.

× It makes me easy to shop.

✓ It makes it easy for me to shop.

The original sentence lacks the correct preposition and structure. 'Make someone easy to do something' is incorrect. The correct form is 'make it easy for someone to do something'. This clarifies who finds the action easy and what the action is.

× I mean what should I get to?

✓ I mean, what should I get?

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary and incorrect here. The sentence is a question about what to get, so it should end with 'get' without 'to'.

× It helps me to forget the missing prepping because I'm working in the kitchen.

✓ It helps me not to forget the missing prep because I'm working in the kitchen.

The phrase 'helps me to forget' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is to avoid forgetting. Also, 'prepping' is informal and 'prep' is more appropriate as a noun here. The correction clarifies the intended meaning.

× Then if something missing it bothers my work.

✓ Then if something is missing, it bothers my work.

The original sentence lacks the verb 'is' after 'something', which is necessary for correct sentence structure. Adding 'is' completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.

× Because I think in my case I'm working in the kitchen.

✓ I think, in my case, I'm working in the kitchen.

Starting a sentence with 'Because' without completing the thought leads to a sentence fragment. Removing 'Because' or completing the sentence is necessary. Here, removing 'Because' makes the sentence complete and correct.

× Then after service people get very tired of doing something.

✓ Then, after service, people get very tired of doing things.

The phrase 'doing something' is vague and awkward here. 'Doing things' is more natural. Also, commas after 'Then' and 'after service' improve clarity.

× So maybe some people don't like because tired.

✓ So maybe some people don't like it because they are tired.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a subject and verb after 'because'. Adding 'they are' clarifies the reason and completes the sentence.

× I prefer to make a list on paper because I like to write then.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I like to write then.

The word 'then' is incorrect here; it should be 'there' to indicate the location where writing occurs. Corrected sentence: 'I prefer to make a list on paper because I like to write there.' However, since 'then' is not in the problem list, no correction is made.