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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Yes, I frequently make a list when I shopping because it's very convenient and I avoid to. I avoid forgetting some very important items with this list.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Yes, I already make a list when I work in my workplace because and it always works because making having a list help me to organize my workload effectively. I can check it.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

In my personal opinion, some people dislike making lists because they have a good memory. They used to remember numbers or information in mind. So making list my wasted.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

In the past, I prefer to make a list on paper, but in recent years I like to make a list on my smartphone because it's very convenient. I can check the list whenever I need it.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误,如“when I shopping”应为“when I shop”,以及“avoid to”应为“avoid”。建议注意动词形式和搭配,避免语法错误,同时回答可以更简洁自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a shopping list because it helps me remember important items and saves time.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和表达不连贯的问题,如“because and it always works because making having a list help me”。建议简化句子结构,使用正确的时态和连词,使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list at work because it helps me organize my tasks efficiently and ensures I don't forget anything.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,如“making list my wasted”不通顺。建议加强句子结构练习,使用正确的表达方式,并提供更具体的理由。

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they have a good memory and prefer to remember things mentally, so they feel lists are unnecessary.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然,但时态使用不够准确,如“prefer”应与“liked”保持一致。建议注意时态一致性,并尝试使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I used to prefer making lists on paper, but recently I prefer using my smartphone because it's more convenient and I can access my lists anytime.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× Yes, I frequently make a list when I shopping because it's very convenient and I avoid to.

Yes, I frequently make a list when I am shopping because it's very convenient and I avoid forgetting.

动词shopping在这里需要使用现在进行时态,表示正在进行的动作,应该用am/is/are + 动词-ing形式。此外,avoid后面应直接接动词的-ing形式,不能接to + 动词原形。

Verb + -ing form

× I avoid forgetting some very important items with this list.

I avoid forgetting some very important items with this list.

此句语法正确,无需修改。

Present tense issue

× Yes, I already make a list when I work in my workplace because and it always works because making having a list help me to organize my workload effectively.

Yes, I already make a list when I work in my workplace because it always works; having a list helps me to organize my workload effectively.

句中“because and”连接词使用错误,应去掉“and”。“making having a list”表达不清,应改为“having a list”。主语“having a list”是单数,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“helps”。

Verb + -ing form

× I can check it.

I can check it.

此句语法正确,无需修改。

Incorrect use of conjunction

× In my personal opinion, some people dislike making lists because they have a good memory.

In my personal opinion, some people dislike making lists because they have a good memory.

此句语法正确,无需修改。

Past tense issue

× They used to remember numbers or information in mind.

They are used to remembering numbers or information in mind.

“used to”表示过去习惯,句意应表达“习惯于”,应使用“be used to + 动词-ing”结构,表示习惯于做某事。

Sentence structure errors

× So making list my wasted.

So making lists is a waste of time for me.

原句结构混乱,缺少谓语动词,且“my wasted”表达不正确。应改为完整句子,表达“对我来说,做清单是浪费时间”。

Present tense issue

× In the past, I prefer to make a list on paper, but in recent years I like to make a list on my smartphone because it's very convenient.

In the past, I preferred to make a list on paper, but in recent years I like to make a list on my smartphone because it's very convenient.

“In the past”表示过去,谓语动词应使用过去式“preferred”。

Present tense issue

× I can check the list whenever I need it.

I can check the list whenever I need it.

此句语法正确,无需修改。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
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