Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do make a list when I shop because it helps me to remember what to buy. Without a lease I cannot really memorize what I need to buy in a shop so.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do. I'm, uh, make a list for my work. It works. Uh, it really helps me a lot because, uh, I need to prioritize, uh, what is the most important to do first and then, uh, the less important will, uh, I will, uh, I would do.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Because making list takes time and to to think and to write. So some people who think that they can do a task without making a list, they prefer not to wasting their time by writing and thinking about what to write in the.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on paper because I write with pen faster than typing on your phone. And uh, if the paper and pen not available then only I will use phone to make a list.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Perbaiki penggunaan kata dan tata bahasa agar jawaban terdengar lebih alami dan efektif. Hindari pengulangan dan kesalahan kata seperti 'lease' yang seharusnya 'list'. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas.
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember exactly what I need to buy, so I don't forget anything important.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Kurangi penggunaan pengisi kata seperti 'uh' dan perbaiki struktur kalimat agar lebih jelas dan lancar. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren dan tambahkan detail spesifik.
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me prioritize tasks. For example, I focus on the most important jobs first and then complete the less urgent ones later.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami. Jelaskan alasan dengan lebih spesifik dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk memperjelas hubungan antar ide.
Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because it takes time to think and write them down. They believe they can complete tasks without planning, so they prefer to save time by not making lists.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Hindari pengisi kata dan perbaiki tata bahasa agar jawaban lebih alami dan efektif. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas dengan alasan yang spesifik.
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because writing with a pen is faster for me than typing on my phone. However, if I don't have paper, I use my phone instead.
× Without a lease I cannot really memorize what I need to buy in a shop so.
✓ Without a list, I cannot really memorize what I need to buy in a shop.
The word 'lease' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'list'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'so', which is unnecessary and should be removed for clarity.
× I'm, uh, make a list for my work.
✓ I make a list for my work.
The phrase 'I'm, uh, make' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'I make' to indicate a habitual action in the present tense.
× the less important will, uh, I will, uh, I would do.
✓ the less important ones I will do later.
The phrase is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Less important' should be followed by a noun like 'ones', and the verb phrase should be clear and consistent.
× Because making list takes time and to to think and to write.
✓ Because making lists takes time to think and to write.
The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match the general statement about making lists.
× they prefer not to wasting their time by writing and thinking about what to write in the.
✓ they prefer not to waste their time by writing and thinking about what to write.
The verb after 'prefer not to' should be in base form 'waste', and the sentence ends abruptly with 'in the', which should be removed.
× I write with pen faster than typing on your phone.
✓ I write with a pen faster than typing on my phone.
The article 'a' is needed before 'pen', and the pronoun should be consistent with the speaker, so 'your phone' should be 'my phone'.
× And uh, if the paper and pen not available then only I will use phone to make a list.
✓ And, uh, if paper and pen are not available, then I will use my phone to make a list.
The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'paper and pen' in this context. Also, the verb 'are' is needed for subject-verb agreement, and 'my phone' is more appropriate than just 'phone'.