Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Actually, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. For example, I like to choose fresh fruit based on what looks good that day.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Absolutely yes. I always make a list for my work. For example, when I study English, I will make a study list to improve my English much better.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
From my perspective, some people don't like meeting lists because they feel it limits their creativity and flexibility. For example, when they flow a street plan, they might lose the freedom to explore new ideas.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Actually, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's extremely convenient for our life. For for example, I can quickly add or delete items anytime without needing a pen or paper. MMM Oh.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 你的回答较为自然且内容相关,但句子结构稍显简单,且缺少连接词使得表达不够连贯。建议在回答中使用连接词如“because”或“so”来增强逻辑性,同时丰富细节,使回答更具体。
Ví dụ: I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. For instance, I often choose fresh fruit based on what looks good that day, so I can enjoy the best quality produce.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答直接但表达不够自然,且句子结构重复。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并用连接词连接观点和例子,使回答更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized. For example, when I study English, I create a study list to track my progress and improve more effectively.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在用词错误(如"meeting lists"应为"making lists","flow a street plan"不明确),影响表达清晰度。建议注意词汇准确性,并使用更具体的例子来支持观点。
Ví dụ: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they believe it restricts their creativity and flexibility. For instance, when following a strict plan, they might miss opportunities to explore new ideas spontaneously.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中出现重复词汇和语气词(如"For for example"和"MMM Oh"),影响流畅性和专业性。建议避免口语填充词,保持回答简洁自然,并使用连接词增强逻辑。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very convenient. For example, I can easily add or delete items anytime without needing a pen or paper, which saves time and effort.
× some people don't like meeting lists because they feel it limits their creativity and flexibility.
✓ some people don't like making lists because they feel it limits their creativity and flexibility.
这里'meeting'是错误的动词形式,正确的应该是'making',表示“制作清单”。中文解释:动词用错了,应该用'making'表示“制作”,而不是'meeting'。
× when they flow a street plan, they might lose the freedom to explore new ideas.
✓ when they follow a street plan, they might lose the freedom to explore new ideas.
这里'flow'用错了,正确的动词是'follow',表示“遵循”。中文解释:动词用错了,应该用'follow'表示“遵循”,而不是'flow'。
× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's extremely convenient for our life.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's extremely convenient for our lives.
'life'应使用复数形式'lives',因为指的是所有人的生活。中文解释:这里指的是大家的生活,应该用复数形式'lives'。
× For for example, I can quickly add or delete items anytime without needing a pen or paper.
✓ For example, I can quickly add or delete items anytime without needing a pen or paper.
多余的重复词'for'应删除。中文解释:句子中多了一个'for',应删除以保持句子通顺。