Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I make a list when I'm going to shop because, umm, I forget it very much.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Actually I know this is very important for work, but I am not uh make a list for my work because I remember my work every day and I am pretty active person for I am active for my work.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I have not enough idea for a huge question, but I think that list is very important. Or forget the person.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Now we live in a digital world or smart world. That's why I prefer phone. Phone can make we can make a list in own home. This is easy for our life store and I carry.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more fluent and natural by avoiding filler words like 'umm'. Also, provide a bit more detail to explain why making a list helps you. For example, mention how it helps you remember items and saves time.
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget things easily. It helps me stay organized and ensures I don't miss anything important.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Focus on structuring your answer clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid filler words and improve grammar for clarity. Explain why you don't make lists and how your active nature helps you manage work.
Ví dụ: I don't usually make lists for my work because I remember my tasks well. Since I am very active and organized, I can keep track of my responsibilities without writing them down.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Try to answer directly and clearly. Avoid saying you don't have ideas; instead, give possible reasons why some people dislike making lists, such as finding them time-consuming or restrictive. Use linking words to connect your ideas.
Ví dụ: Some people might not like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things naturally. Also, they may feel that lists limit their flexibility.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Provide a clear preference and explain reasons with specific details. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I always have it with me. This way, I can easily add or check items anytime, which makes my life simpler.
× Yes, I make a list when I'm going to shop because, umm, I forget it very much.
✓ Yes, I make a list when I go shopping because, umm, I forget things very often.
The phrase 'I'm going to shop' is awkward here; 'I go shopping' is the correct present tense expression for habitual actions. Also, 'forget it very much' is incorrect; 'forget things very often' is clearer and grammatically correct.
× Actually I know this is very important for work, but I am not uh make a list for my work because I remember my work every day and I am pretty active person for I am active for my work.
✓ Actually, I know this is very important for work, but I do not make a list for my work because I remember my tasks every day and I am a pretty active person when it comes to my work.
The phrase 'I am not uh make a list' is incorrect; it should be 'I do not make a list'. Also, 'active person for I am active for my work' is awkward; 'active person when it comes to my work' is clearer. 'Remember my work' is vague; 'remember my tasks' is more precise.
× I have not enough idea for a huge question, but I think that list is very important. Or forget the person.
✓ I do not have enough ideas to answer such a big question, but I think that lists are very important. Otherwise, people might forget things.
'I have not enough idea' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I do not have enough ideas'. 'For a huge question' is awkward; 'to answer such a big question' is better. 'Or forget the person' is unclear; it is corrected to 'Otherwise, people might forget things' to convey the intended meaning.
× Now we live in a digital world or smart world. That's why I prefer phone. Phone can make we can make a list in own home. This is easy for our life store and I carry.
✓ Now we live in a digital or smart world. That's why I prefer using my phone. With a phone, we can make a list at home. It is easy to store and carry with us.
'Digital world or smart world' should be 'digital or smart world' to avoid redundancy. 'I prefer phone' is incorrect; it should be 'I prefer using my phone'. 'Phone can make we can make a list in own home' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'With a phone, we can make a list at home'. 'This is easy for our life store and I carry' is unclear; corrected to 'It is easy to store and carry with us' for clarity.