Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
No, I usually don't make a list 1 before I go shopping. I think it's very complex for me to do that. I just buy whatever I see and whatever I want when I was shopping, when I'm shopping.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
No, I usually don't make a shopping list before I go out. I think it's very complicated and time consuming. Actually I I just buy what I see and what I want when I am shopping.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
OK, I'm the kind of people that doesn't want to make shopping lists. Actually, I think it's very complicated and time consuming. It makes shopping a very stressful test. So I don't want to make a shopping list.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Actually, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I take I usually take my phone with me everywhere, so. So it's very convenient for me to write down something important information so that I can't forget it.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 你的回答有些重复,且语法不够准确。建议回答时直接表达观点,避免重复,并注意时态一致。可以适当丰富细节,使回答更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I find it unnecessary. I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I need at the moment.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答内容与问题不符,考官问的是工作清单,而你回答的是购物清单。建议回答时注意理解问题,直接回答并提供相关细节。
Ví dụ: No, I don't usually make a list for my work because I prefer to handle tasks as they come. However, sometimes I jot down important tasks to stay organized.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答时应更直接回答问题,避免将个人习惯当作普遍原因。建议提供更具体的原因,并用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to shop spontaneously. Moreover, making lists can sometimes add pressure to stick to a plan.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较好,但有语法错误和重复。建议简洁表达,注意句子结构和连贯性。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. It's convenient and helps me remember important things easily.
× I just buy whatever I see and whatever I want when I was shopping, when I'm shopping.
✓ I just buy whatever I see and whatever I want when I'm shopping.
这里的时间状语是现在进行时"when I'm shopping",所以动词时态应保持一致,使用一般现在时"buy",而不是过去时"was shopping"。
× I just buy whatever I see and whatever I want when I was shopping, when I'm shopping.
✓ I just buy whatever I see and whatever I want when I am shopping.
"when I was shopping"与前后时态不一致,应改为"when I am shopping",保持时态一致。
× I just buy what I see and what I want when I am shopping.
✓ I just buy what I see and what I want when I am shopping.
该句无明显时态错误,符合语境。
× I'm the kind of people that doesn't want to make shopping lists.
✓ I'm the kind of person that doesn't want to make shopping lists.
"kind"后应接单数名词"person",而非复数"people",以保持主谓一致。
× I'm the kind of people that doesn't want to make shopping lists.
✓ I'm the kind of person that doesn't want to make shopping lists.
"that"指代单数"person",谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"doesn't",这里原句正确。
× Actually I I just buy what I see and what I want when I am shopping.
✓ Actually, I just buy what I see and what I want when I am shopping.
句中"I I"重复,应删除一个"I",并在"Actually"后加逗号,使句子更通顺。
× So. So it's very convenient for me to write down something important information so that I can't forget it.
✓ So, it's very convenient for me to write down some important information so that I don't forget it.
"So. So"重复且断句不当,应合并为"So,"。"something important information"搭配不当,应改为"some important information"。"can't forget"表达错误,应为"don't forget"表示避免忘记。