Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember everything I need and the prevents me from buying necessary items. For example, last weekend I planned my meals and written down all the agent which.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I usually make a list for my worker need to help me stay organized and focus on my work. It's a greater way to save time and efforts.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I think, uh, it depends on their personality and, uh, habits. For some people make, uh, these, uh, letters and feel nervous so they want more freedom. And some people don't like make sense. They just like, remember, uh, uh.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
As for me, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's convenient and I can set a reminder on my phone anytime, anywhere. It will gives me notification that I won't forget something important.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了基本意思,但存在语法错误和用词不当,如“the prevents me from buying necessary items”应为“prevents me from buying unnecessary items”,以及“all the agent which”不清楚。建议加强语法准确性,避免用词错误,并且使句子更简洁自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before going to the store because it helps me remember everything I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary items. For example, last weekend I planned my meals and wrote down all the ingredients I needed.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“for my worker need”不通顺,应为“for my work to help me”。另外,“It's a greater way”表达不自然,建议使用更地道的表达。建议注意句子结构和词汇搭配,使表达更准确流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list for my work to help me stay organized and focus. It is an effective way to save time and effort.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中充满了犹豫词汇“uh”,且句子结构混乱,表达不清晰。建议减少口头语,理清思路,使用完整且连贯的句子表达观点。
Ví dụ: I think it depends on their personality and habits. Some people feel nervous when making lists because they want more freedom. Others prefer to rely on memory rather than writing things down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容具体,但存在小的语法错误,如“It will gives me notification”应为“It gives me notifications”。建议注意主谓一致和复数形式,使表达更准确。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's convenient and I can set reminders anytime, anywhere. It gives me notifications so I won't forget anything important.
× it helps me remember everything I need and the prevents me from buying necessary items.
✓ it helps me remember everything I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary items.
这里的错误是复数和单数的问题。'the prevents' 中的 'the' 是多余的,应该去掉;'necessary items' 应该是 'unnecessary items',因为句意是防止买不必要的东西。建议去掉多余的冠词,并使用正确的形容词。
× last weekend I planned my meals and written down all the agent which.
✓ last weekend I planned my meals and wrote down all the ingredients.
这里的错误是过去时态使用不当。'written' 是过去分词,应该用过去式 'wrote'。另外,'agent which' 词不达意,应该是 'ingredients'(食材)。建议使用正确的过去式动词和合适的词汇。
× I usually make a list for my worker need to help me stay organized and focus on my work.
✓ I usually make a list for my work to help me stay organized and focus on my work.
这里的错误是单复数问题。'worker need' 不合适,应该是 'work'。建议使用正确的名词形式。
× It's a greater way to save time and efforts.
✓ It's a great way to save time and effort.
这里的错误是单复数问题。'greater' 应该是 'great','efforts' 应该用不可数名词 'effort'。建议使用正确的形容词和不可数名词。
× For some people make, uh, these, uh, letters and feel nervous so they want more freedom.
✓ For some people, making these lists makes them feel nervous, so they want more freedom.
这里的错误是句子结构问题。原句结构混乱,缺少主语和谓语的正确搭配。建议使用动名词短语作为主语,并保持句子结构完整。
× And some people don't like make sense.
✓ And some people don't like making lists.
这里的错误是动词使用不当。'don't like make' 应该是 'don't like making',并且 'make sense' 词义不符,应该是 'making lists'。建议使用动名词形式和正确的表达。
× It will gives me notification that I won't forget something important.
✓ It will give me notifications so that I won't forget something important.
这里的错误是情态动词使用错误。'will gives' 中 'gives' 应该是原形 'give'。另外,'notification' 应该用复数 'notifications',并且句子连接更自然。建议注意情态动词后动词用原形。