List— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I don't usually make a list before I go shopping. However, when I need to make important purchases, I occasionally prepare to a list to ensure I don't forget anything. This helps me stay organized and save time doing shopping.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always make a list before starting my work because my memory is quite poor. Making a list helps me organize my tasks clearly and ensures that I don't forget everything important throughout the day. This method really improves my efficiency and keeps me focused.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Some people don't like making this because they think it takes too much time and effort. They prefer to enjoy spontaneous events and not plan everything in advance. For example, they might like to be more flexible and decide what to do at the moment.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Actually, when I make important decisions, I really prefer to make lists on my mobile phone as a very convenient and efficient way to remember things because I can easily search and edit the list anytime. So using my phone helps me keep everything organized without worrying about losing paper.
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Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 你的回答较为自然且内容完整，但有些表达不够地道，例如“prepare to a list”应为“prepare a list”，且“save time doing shopping”可以更简洁。建议注意动词搭配和句子简洁性。
Ví dụ: I don't usually make a list when I shop, but for important purchases, I sometimes prepare a list to avoid forgetting anything. This helps me stay organized and save time.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 90.0Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰，内容具体，但“don't forget everything important”表达不准确，建议改为“don't forget anything important”。同时可以增加连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list before starting work because my memory isn't very good. It helps me organize tasks clearly and ensures I don't forget anything important, which improves my efficiency and keeps me focused.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 88.0Gợi ý: 回答内容合理，但“making this”表达不准确，应为“making lists”。建议注意代词使用和句子衔接，可以用连接词如“because”或“so”增强逻辑。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time and effort. Therefore, they prefer to enjoy spontaneous events and decide what to do at the moment for more flexibility.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 92.0Gợi ý: 回答内容丰富且表达清晰，但句子较长，建议适当拆分以增强表达的自然流畅性。
Ví dụ: Actually, I prefer to make lists on my mobile phone when making important decisions. It's convenient and efficient because I can easily search and edit the list anytime. This way, I stay organized without worrying about losing paper.
Ngữ pháp
× I occasionally prepare to a list to ensure I don't forget anything.
✓ I occasionally prepare a list to ensure I don't forget anything.
这里的错误是介词“to”的错误使用，prepare后面直接接名词短语，不需要介词。正确用法是“prepare a list”。
× Some people don't like making this because they think it takes too much time and effort.
✓ Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time and effort.
这里的代词“this”指代不明确，应该用复数名词“lists”来明确指代“making lists”。
× I really prefer to make lists on my mobile phone as a very convenient and efficient way to remember things because I can easily search and edit the list anytime.
✓ I really prefer to make lists on my mobile phone as a very convenient and efficient way to remember things because I can easily search and edit the lists anytime.
前面提到“lists”为复数，后面“edit the list”应与前文保持一致，使用复数形式“lists”。
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