List— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do make a list whenever I go shopping because it's a really good way to help me keep track of all the things that I need to buy and to avoid imposed shopping, which can help to cut down on many unnecessary items.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yeah. So every day before I start working, I usually make a list to check all the tasks that I need to finish on that day. And the list helped me to always stay on top of the things that I need to do and also to increase my work productivity.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I think that to those people who don't like making list, they think that making A to do list is something that is unnecessary. But in the future, I think that people tend to change that behavior because the sooner or later they will realize the importance of at least they can help them to keep track of their things.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
But the advancement of technology these day, I would definitely say that I would prefer to make a list on my phone, yeah, because my phone is portable and I can bring it to everywhere. And that means I can, uh, always keep track of the things that I need to do just within a device.
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Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và rõ ràng, nhưng bạn nên tránh dùng từ "imposed shopping" vì nó không phổ biến và có thể gây hiểu nhầm. Bạn có thể dùng từ "impulse shopping" để diễn đạt chính xác hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể ngắn gọn hơn để tránh dài dòng.
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need and prevents impulse buying, which saves money.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 88.0Gợi ý: Bạn trả lời tốt với cấu trúc rõ ràng và nội dung cụ thể. Tuy nhiên, bạn nên chú ý thì động từ cho phù hợp, ví dụ "the list helps me" thay vì "helped me" để thể hiện thói quen hiện tại. Ngoài ra, có thể thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list before starting work each day because it helps me stay organized and increases my productivity.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cấu trúc câu hơi phức tạp và có lỗi ngữ pháp như "making A to do list" nên là "making a to-do list". Bạn nên dùng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng liên từ phù hợp để câu mạch lạc hơn.
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they think it's unnecessary. However, I believe that eventually they will realize lists help them stay organized.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: Bạn trả lời rõ ràng và có lý do cụ thể. Tuy nhiên, câu đầu tiên bắt đầu bằng "But" không phù hợp vì không có câu trước để đối lập. Ngoài ra, bạn nên tránh dùng từ lặp lại như "I would definitely say that I would prefer" và sửa lỗi nhỏ như "these day" thành "these days". Hãy nói ngắn gọn và tự nhiên hơn.
Ví dụ: With today's technology, I prefer making lists on my phone because it's portable and I can easily keep track of my tasks anywhere.
Ngữ pháp
× I think that to those people who don't like making list, they think that making A to do list is something that is unnecessary.
✓ I think that those people who don't like making lists think that making a to-do list is something that is unnecessary.
The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making multiple lists. Also, 'A to do list' should be 'a to-do list' with lowercase and hyphens. The phrase 'to those people' is unnecessary and incorrect here; it should be 'those people'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.
× But the advancement of technology these day, I would definitely say that I would prefer to make a list on my phone, yeah, because my phone is portable and I can bring it to everywhere.
✓ But with the advancement of technology these days, I would definitely say that I prefer to make a list on my phone, yeah, because my phone is portable and I can bring it everywhere.
The phrase 'the advancement of technology these day' should be 'with the advancement of technology these days' to use the correct preposition and plural form. Also, 'bring it to everywhere' is incorrect; it should be 'bring it everywhere' without 'to'. These changes correct prepositional and plural usage errors.
× And the list helped me to always stay on top of the things that I need to do and also to increase my work productivity.
✓ And the list helps me to always stay on top of the things that I need to do and also to increase my work productivity.
The verb 'helped' is in past tense, but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'helps' is appropriate. This correction aligns the verb tense with the intended meaning.
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