Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course, because a list can make it clear for me about what I want.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes I do well I always make a list in during my final due because it makes my life more organized and make my timetable more clear.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Uh, I think they may think Alice will limit their space of measuring. For example, I will feel some stress when I face to a organized list because I have too much.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Definitely, I prefer riding at least on phone because I don't have a habit to bring a paper with me because it is really easy to lost the paper before I can put up and see it easily.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答较为简单,表达不够自然,且句子结构有些生硬。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并且避免重复表达“make it clear”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember exactly what I need to buy and saves me time.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,句子结构混乱。建议简化句子,使用连贯的表达,并注意时态和冠词的使用。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a to-do list when I have deadlines because it helps me stay organized and manage my time better.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不清晰,表达混乱,词汇使用不当。建议明确表达观点,使用恰当的词汇,并给出具体原因。
Ví dụ: I think some people dislike making lists because they feel restricted and stressed by having to follow a strict plan.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和拼写错误,表达不够流畅。建议注意动词形式和拼写,简化句子结构,使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: Definitely, I prefer making lists on my phone because I usually don't carry paper with me, and it's easy to lose paper before I can check it.
× Yes I do well I always make a list in during my final due because it makes my life more organized and make my timetable more clear.
✓ Yes, I do. Well, I always make a list during my final due because it makes my life more organized and makes my timetable clearer.
句中“make”应与主语“it”保持一致,使用第三人称单数形式“makes”。此外,“in during”是错误的介词搭配,应去掉“in”。“more clear”应改为比较级“clearer”。
× Yes I do well I always make a list in during my final due because it makes my life more organized and make my timetable more clear.
✓ Yes, I do. Well, I always make a list during my final due because it makes my life more organized and makes my timetable clearer.
“in during”是错误的介词搭配,应去掉“in”,只用“during”。
× Uh, I think they may think Alice will limit their space of measuring.
✓ Uh, I think they may think a list will limit their space for measuring.
“Alice”应为“a list”,且“space of measuring”应改为“space for measuring”,介词使用错误。
× Uh, I think they may think Alice will limit their space of measuring.
✓ Uh, I think they may think a list will limit their space for measuring.
“space of measuring”中的介词“of”用法不当,应改为“for”。
× For example, I will feel some stress when I face to a organized list because I have too much.
✓ For example, I will feel some stress when I face an organized list because I have too much.
“face”后不需要介词“to”,应直接跟宾语。
× For example, I will feel some stress when I face to a organized list because I have too much.
✓ For example, I will feel some stress when I face an organized list because I have too much.
“a organized”中“organized”以元音音素开头,应使用不定冠词“an”。
× Definitely, I prefer riding at least on phone because I don't have a habit to bring a paper with me because it is really easy to lost the paper before I can put up and see it easily.
✓ Definitely, I prefer writing at least on my phone because I don't have a habit of bringing paper with me since it is really easy to lose the paper before I can put it up and see it easily.
“riding”应为“writing”,动词错误;“on phone”应为“on my phone”,缺少所有格;“a habit to bring”应为“a habit of bringing”,介词搭配错误;“lost”应为“lose”,动词形式错误;“put up”后应加宾语“it”。