Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I'll make a litmus shop because I need a list. I will mark something for your bike.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always make a list because I think it's well clear for me. I see that it work is very.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Because some people think make list is very broader. For example, people need marked so many things in the list. And people not finished.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think this is very easy and convection. I can make a list anytime at any rate.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 你的回答不够清晰,存在语法错误和词汇使用不当的问题。建议你直接回答问题,并用简单明了的句子表达,比如说明你会做购物清单的原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need to buy.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够自然。建议你用完整的句子说明你做工作清单的习惯及其效果,并用连接词使句子连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and complete tasks efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不够具体,语法和词汇错误较多。建议你用更准确的词汇表达原因,并举具体例子说明。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and stressful to write down many tasks they might not finish.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中有拼写错误和表达不够自然。建议你用正确的词汇表达偏好,并说明原因,使用连接词使句子流畅。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is convenient and I can add items anytime and anywhere.
× Yes, I'll make a litmus shop because I need a list.
✓ Yes, I'll make a list because I need a list.
这里的 'litmus shop' 是错误的词语,应该是 'list'。此外,'list' 是可数名词,单复数形式要正确。
× I will mark something for your bike.
✓ I will mark something for my bike.
这里的 'your' 应该是 'my',因为说话者在谈论自己的购物清单。代词使用错误。
× I see that it work is very.
✓ I see that it works very well.
'work' 应该用第三人称单数形式 'works',且句子不完整,补充 'very well' 使句子完整。
× I see that it work is very.
✓ I see that it works very well.
主语是第三人称单数 'it',谓语动词应加 's',即 'works'。
× Because some people think make list is very broader.
✓ Because some people think making lists is very boring.
'make list' 应改为动名词短语 'making lists',且 'broader' 用错,应为 'boring'。
× Because some people think make list is very broader.
✓ Because some people think making lists is very boring.
动词 'think' 后面接动名词 'making',而不是动词原形 'make'。
× For example, people need marked so many things in the list.
✓ For example, people need to mark so many things on the list.
'marked' 应为动词原形 'mark',且介词应为 'on',表示在清单上标记。
× For example, people need marked so many things in the list.
✓ For example, people need to mark so many things on the list.
介词 'in' 应改为 'on',表示在清单上。
× And people not finished.
✓ And people do not finish.
这里应使用一般现在时,且缺少助动词 'do'。
× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think this is very easy and convection.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think this is very easy and convenient.
'convection' 是错误单词,应为形容词 'convenient'。
× I can make a list anytime at any rate.
✓ I can make a list anytime at any rate.
'at any rate' 习惯用法表示 '无论如何',这里语境不合适,建议改为 'anywhere' 或 'anytime'。但根据题目要求只纠正语法错误,故保留。